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A Walk In the Park

Walking barefoot in the park upon a carpet of grass, I feel dewy fingers massage and tickle my toes. A cool tactile breeze tussles my unruly mop of hair, sending a chill running down along the length of my spine. Soaking up rays, I bathe in the sunlight, baring my skin to its therapeutic touch, bringing a blush to my cheeks. And the roughened bark of an accommodating shade-tree scratches a persistent itch, as it rubs my grateful back.

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Skat A

Date: 9/8/2015 9:09:00 AM

Emile, Congrats on your sense of touch win. **SKAT**

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/8/2015 9:50:00 AM

Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2015 8:59:00 PM

this is amazing!! You get an A+ for doing exactly what Nette asked. BIG congrats.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/8/2015 8:31:00 AM

Thanks so much Andrea, your visits and comments are always most appreciated. Emile.

James Inman

Date: 9/7/2015 9:15:00 AM

Beautiful images, Emile. I feel your poem.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/7/2015 1:45:00 PM

Thanks James, your comments are always appreciated. Emile.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/6/2015 7:45:00 PM

Fabulous write, Emile, congratulations on your win a 7! Hugs Eve

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/7/2015 9:13:00 AM

Thanks Eve, your comments are always welcome. Emile.

Jill Spagnola

Date: 9/6/2015 12:41:00 PM

I just love when a poet has the skills to put me there! awesome :), jill

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/6/2015 4:26:00 PM

Thanks jill, I appreciate your friendly comments. Emile.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/6/2015 12:06:00 PM

i feel like being cuddled by the grass and nature in the park...truly a well deserved win, emile.. thanks for supporting my contest and happy congrats!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/6/2015 4:27:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words Nette, it was my pleasure to participate in your contest with such talented poets, Emile.

Joseph May

Date: 9/6/2015 10:33:00 AM

A fine write and win ...Congrats

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/6/2015 11:00:00 AM

Thanks Joseph, I appreciate it. Emile.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/6/2015 7:45:00 AM

Amazingly beautiful Emile! Congrats on superb win !

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/6/2015 8:40:00 AM

Thanks Upma, I appreciate it. Emile.

Noel Villarosa

Date: 9/2/2015 3:03:00 AM

Beautiful poem, a perfect interaction with nature. A natural way to relax. (^_^) Noel.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/2/2015 8:01:00 AM

Thanks Noel, I appreciate your friendly comments. Emile.

Josefina Costales

Date: 8/31/2015 8:13:00 AM

contest or not, as it stands the poem creates lighthearted imageries awaking the "sense of touch".

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/31/2015 3:03:00 PM

Thank you Josefina, what a nice thing to say. Emile.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/30/2015 7:20:00 PM

A nice relaxing image you have written Emile - Lindsay

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/31/2015 7:57:00 AM

Thanks Lindsay, I appreciate it. Emile.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/30/2015 2:10:00 PM

Emile, this is a beautiful and engaging piece. Great imagey. Walking barefoot in the park on a day like you described is just wonderful. Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/30/2015 4:53:00 PM

Thanks Alexis, I appreciate your friendly comments. Emile.