A Walk Away

A walk away that is how far I want us to be... So, when I yearn to be with you.. No longer than an hour, I will be there... Looking lock deep to your hazel eyes Wrapping you along with a blanket of love Kisses you blew Invited my heart To dance in blue bubble clouds Heartbeats in rollercoaster bliss Breathing in a waterfall release Butterflies shall guard my walk An eerie magical flick of innocence Believing like a child Curiosity a tonic climb Unmindful what's the end A walk away... (c)Olive Eloisa 1:30pm September 26, 2014

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James Fraser

Date: 9/28/2014 11:43:00 AM

Delightful poetry Olive. I'd walk a million miles for one of your smiles, och!! I've blue eyes as well ;)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/29/2015 7:35:00 AM

thanks much JAmes.. :) appreciate your every drop.. :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/27/2014 7:44:00 AM

this for me excellent pen very beautifully crafted piece

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/29/2015 7:34:00 AM

thanks much Liam.. :)!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/26/2014 11:06:00 PM

This is beautiful, well except for the fact I have BLUE eyes!!!!!! Hugs!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/27/2014 6:33:00 AM

Hahahaha okei okei...:) thanks Buddy Art..:)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/26/2014 6:40:00 PM

Stunning Olive....I love it....hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/26/2014 8:02:00 PM

Thanks Tim..:) GBU hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 9/26/2014 5:51:00 PM

Beautiful and touching...I love it Olive_eloi!! Such lovely emotions you evoke. Who could resist such a romantic overture! A walk away would be perfect...but even a trip across the world would not deter two people in love from meeting! Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/26/2014 8:01:00 PM

Thanks much Paul..:) appreciate I too..:) hugs..:)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2014 4:37:00 AM

ooh I'm sure he'd walk a million miles to be with you after this heartfelt write:-) amazing imagery Olive it made me feel all tingly:-) hugs jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/26/2014 8:00:00 PM

Thanks much Jan..:) God bless you..:)