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A Visitor

I am a visitor to a confused world and have appeared without malice or anger. I've seen with eyes of disappointment, for humanity truly Earth is a beautiful place, separated from humans that inhabit it destroying without thought such destruction... for such a brief lifespan a creature that believes itself important failing to grasp it is only a flash of light in a dark vast universe if only, humanity was as beautiful as the planet they cling to emotions, interwoven with the lives of others finding paradise surrounded by death as a visitor, I can say the ride has been interesting the place is filled with trash and overrun with murderers and thieves what angry creatures humans are 7/29/15

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Date: 8/6/2015 11:22:00 PM
That's an amazing you Frederic! love the unique take, i too hate wars n bloodshed, Congrats on big win! Great knowing your mind!
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Date: 8/6/2015 6:24:00 PM
Frederic,, congratulations on your win, In Charlotte's contest... SKAT
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Date: 8/6/2015 4:42:00 PM
Yes.........our themes, and our minds were in the same place, Frederic. ! Isn't it a sad reflection on the world today, that we would have this pop into our muse when writing a poem? How can we not? It needs to be said...and you have spoken eloquently with the truth. Akin and alike is our deep concern.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/6/2015 4:45:00 PM
Sorry Carrie somehow my reply to Charlotte ended up on your reply.We have lived through the same times my poetic friend and have seen the same things.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/6/2015 4:42:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness Charlotte
Date: 8/6/2015 2:52:00 PM
once again I find you on my winners' list with a superb piece; consistent quality writing from you - congrats on your win!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/6/2015 4:46:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness Charlotte
Date: 7/29/2015 1:57:00 PM
Dear Frederic Parker, this poem shows deeply your feelings against the cruel mankind...and condemns violence and destruction...good one ...enjoyed reading it, Love, Anulaxmi
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