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Feb. 8, 2021

Inspired by winter's magic: snow glorious snow, creating a fantasy world where there is pause and peace.

A View From My Window Perched high above the tree line A lofty place to be, A birds-eye view of roof tops And smoking chimney's. Rising higher than the eye can see, Spiral rings take flight, Riding on the playful wind, Like string-less kites; vanish out of sight. A sleepy village awakens To a blanket of pristine snow, Gaily glazing abandoned fields, Where flowers use to grow. Window panes are frosted In delicate scalloped lace, Fences stand like sentinels, Wearing a bearded face. Clerical collars band wooden columns, Whose ledges are built of stone, And flirtatious flakes, congregate, A textured pattern all their own. Eaves, hard line edges, Now swathed in frothy white, A creamy marshmallow icing; An illustrated, storybook delight. As daylight turns to dusk, And street lamps begin to glow, The drifting snow keeps rising, With peace and calm below.

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Date: 3/15/2021 1:45:00 PM
If only the world could stay at peace when the thaw comes..... Lovely read
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Date: 2/27/2021 4:12:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem very much. The imagery is very good as is the flow. John
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/28/2021 7:55:00 AM
Thank you John. I enjoyed writing this poem; have been snowbound, creating a great deal of time to reflect. Take Care, Paulette
Date: 2/19/2021 4:24:00 PM
Ahh!! Great rhyme, rhythm, and flow to this one. It is very creative and descriptive work as well. I enjoyed reading it today. Snow in pictures, in movies, and on TV is very pretty but we are not prepared for it here in the south. I don't like to see it come but it does sometimes. Thanks for dropping by my page and leaving a nice comment. Sara
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/21/2021 9:37:00 AM
Hi Sara, Thank you. Living in the Northeast we experience a lot of snow and I have learned to love it, especially when I don't have to drive in it; I just enjoy the pause and the serenity. Take care.
Date: 2/16/2021 9:44:00 AM
Window planes with lace, fences with bearded fences, Creamy marshmallow icing. So wonderfully you have described snowfall. An absolute delight to read. I have seen pictures and videos of snow and I feel peace and calm every time I see them. God bless! Take care Rama
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/18/2021 9:41:00 AM
Dear Rama, Thank you for stopping in to read my poem. I am happy that the imagery delighted you, truly, the snow is magical; perhaps one day will experience the serenity of snow. God Bless you too!
Date: 2/14/2021 7:49:00 PM
Lovely imagery!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/16/2021 8:22:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I enjoy writing in imagery form, it is like creating a painting, a visual in words.

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