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A Very Hurt Poem

Last night moon was following me discreetly, skirting behind the trees. A white splendor drips, like a dropped coin on poor’s hand. Did you see the blood on roses? The petals were wounded in rain. Casual violence spreads in the streets. I write a very hurt poem. SATISH VERMA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/15/2008 5:53:00 PM
u write deep impressions. ur words are full of images.eyes like beanna` s are noticing you too.how do u draw inspirations? i ve written so much about roses,yet it never occured to me that they could be bloodied and wounded.i love the blood of your pen. cheers! kk
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Date: 12/14/2008 8:14:00 PM
Deep write... *Breana
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