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A Veiled Black Lace Hat

Clare's hands were clasped upon her lap, upon her crown, a veiled black lace hat. A shattered calm she wore; that took on strength self-steadied after several drinks If one dared look closer, to penetrate - then one would see through the black veil's lace, and reveal a woman, blank of face, that long ago had left this place. Clasped hands on which shine a diamond ring lustre lost, as do those things that shine, then dull. A lover's token which she pushed and pulled. Parades of people floated past condolences said and sent as people slowly came and went. Clare remained with hands still clasped upon her lap diamond dully staring back. All had gone, as had he, as Clare fell to her knees face pale and pasty white searching for that brilliant light that never came. Clare stumbled out into the night guided by vodka and lace veiled sight alone again; Clare cried insane until a large sum of money came as did twice before when on her finger shone a diamond ring - lustre lost - as do those things that shine, then dull that push, then pull In her closet, near the back waits a favorite veiled black lace hat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/29/2014 1:29:00 AM
This is another great poem from you, Regina. I love the way that you tell the story. You have a wonderful talent for writing!.... I don't critique poems too often, but for me the 3rd and 8th stanzas were a bit too long. They seemed to slow down the smooth flow of the words. (But, it's all just my opinion!)
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Regina Branham
Date: 5/29/2014 1:38:00 PM
Thanks for your honesty. - on those two stanzas what I was trying to inject was a visual for the reader of a woman sitting in a church pew who is drunk enough to contemplate killing her spouse for money and as she sits she is pushing and pulling in a nervous manner(as she did her marriage) and the reflection she can't hide from. The word order could be played with - then I'm afraid I'll screw the whole thing up. It is hard for me to edit story type poems
Date: 5/1/2014 6:11:00 PM
This is great!! Enjoyed it very much.
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Regina Branham
Date: 5/29/2014 1:42:00 PM
Thanks, different kind of poem. I think I was watching a crime show about women who killed their spouses for money. That's what I came up with.

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