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A Valentine Wedding

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All our friends are gathered Vows are exchanged As we profess our Love on Valentine’s Day Everyone smiles as we share a tender kiss Now we begin our married life Together forever until death do us part I love you so much my darling Never dreamed I could be so blissfully happy Each moment with you is so special Wedding bells are ringing Everyone files out of the church Don’t we look a picture as we pose for the photographs Dressed to perfection for our wonderful wedding day I can’t wait to spend the rest of my life with you Now I have your ring on my finger Getting wed on Valentines Day is a perfect declaration of our love 02~01~16

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/30/2016 10:52:00 AM

Hi Jan, another excellent poem to add to your collection. An Acrostic to boot. A Valentine Wedding is a romantic song that flows so gently. A song of a special journey, a special day, told with creativity and singing images. This song sings into my heart and id so deserving of the seven i give it Jan. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jan Allison
Date: 3/30/2016 10:53:00 AM

Thanks so much Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 2/12/2016 12:30:00 PM

A lovely romantic poem well written x Wendy

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2016 2:26:00 PM

Thanks Wendy I do like the acrostic form:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 11:26:00 AM

thank you for the reply

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 10:34:00 AM

Jan, Congratulations on your "VALENTINE POEM OF YOUR CHOICE win!!!" LINDA

Jan Allison
Date: 2/6/2016 10:52:00 AM

Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/5/2016 7:52:00 AM

Wow!!! What an amazing acrostic poem!!! Congrats Jan, for your well, deserved WIN in the contest!!! ;-) <3

Jan Allison
Date: 2/5/2016 8:26:00 AM

Thanks Teddy I was delighted to place in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Carol Eastman

Date: 2/4/2016 1:26:00 PM

Congrats on your contest placement... This piece worked out perfectly.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/4/2016 1:29:00 PM

Thanks Carol hope you and the menagerie are keeping well:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2016 3:06:00 PM

wow, I am impressed . GREAT win in the contest. Big congrats (to both of us!!!)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2016 3:07:00 PM

Its my pleasure to share the podium with you my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/3/2016 11:39:00 AM

Lovely poem, Jan. Congratulations on your Second Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2016 11:40:00 AM

Thanks Sandra i was delighted to place in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/3/2016 10:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Jan,

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2016 11:26:00 AM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 2/3/2016 2:22:00 AM

Congratulations Jan!! Very lovely and romantic. It is fiction, but you make it sound so real! Hugs ... paul

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2016 10:45:00 AM

Thanks so much Paul - I actually proposed to Bob on Valentines Day... but we have never ever exchanged gifts or cards lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 2/2/2016 10:50:00 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your Valentine win. Love **SKAT**

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2016 10:44:00 AM

Thanks so much Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 2/2/2016 10:31:00 PM

Wonderful Acrostic, Jan. Loved it. Hugs, Bobby

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2016 10:41:00 AM

Thanks so much Bobby:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 2/2/2016 9:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2016 10:41:00 AM

Thanks so much Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/2/2016 5:47:00 PM

Congratulations on this win! Very well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2016 5:49:00 PM

Thanks Susan I am delighted to place so well:-) hugs jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 2/2/2016 5:22:00 PM

Jan, congrats on your placement in the contest *Smiles* :)-luloo :):)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2016 5:23:00 PM

Thanks so much Luloo I am delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/2/2016 4:13:00 AM

Well, it couldn't happen on a better day! There is something special about celebrating what is good!!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2016 3:16:00 PM

Total fiction write for me Duke but I did propose to my hubby on Valentines day and it wasn't a leap year - silly man said yes and we will celebrate our silver wedding anniversary this year:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 2/1/2016 11:47:00 PM

You can't get more Valentinesque than that, Jan. I'm sure you will do well with this lovely piece. Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2016 3:15:00 PM

Thanks Viv we are not great romantics in fact we have never given valentines day gifts ... but after 27 years together if he brought me something I would be very worried lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/1/2016 7:16:00 PM

awww, a sweet one, jan! good luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2016 3:14:00 PM

Thanks Ilene .. I proposed to my hubby on Valentines Day and it wasn't a leap year but we had a June wedding:-) hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/1/2016 5:24:00 PM

The imagery of this piece is well suited to the emotions solicited from the author one of love and bliss. The words seemed to flow effortlessly and the imagery created an atmosphere of tender feelings laced with affection. Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2016 5:28:00 PM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Emile it is always a pleasure to hear from you:-) I'm not sure if this is what Vienna is looking for but I write and hope and i do enjoy the acrostic form:-) hugs Jan xx

Aurore Severo

Date: 2/1/2016 5:12:00 PM

So sweet and romantic, peace and love xoxo

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2016 5:27:00 PM

Aww Aurore thank you so much for dropping by to comment I hope you are keeping well:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rob Bettridge

Date: 2/1/2016 4:42:00 PM

Heartfelt Acrostic Jan.... Woe betide any man that forgets V-Day because he will be in the Dog house for a very long time.

Rob Bettridge
Date: 2/2/2016 1:16:00 PM

Any day could be a surprise Valentine day. However, that could lead to an outburst of " What are you feeling guilty about then?"... Men are Damned if we do and Damned if we don't! Blokes can't seem to win for losing, whatever we do (or don't do). Hmmm.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2016 4:59:00 PM

In 27 years together we have never celebrated it with cards flowers etc lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/1/2016 3:19:00 PM

Tugs at the heartstrings this does, beautiful! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2016 3:46:00 PM

Thanks Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 2/1/2016 3:07:00 PM

A day created for love Jan. Wonderful.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2016 3:46:00 PM

Thanks Tim not sure if it's what Vienna is after ... i have another valentine poem to post which is totally different lol:-) hugs Jan xx