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A Valentine Wedding

Your whispered breath, invites a place, for me to rest my heart Your touch could warm the coldest heart, and break the ice apart It could incite the sun to keep away, and tell the moon to rise and take me far, beyond the place where heaven's gate resides Your hands are guided by the dawn, before the morning comes Content to hold the night awhile, within your gentle palms I beg of you, suspend this time, and keep this moment ours Delay the sun, and keep the night, for I must keep the stars The dawning sun lays softly still, upon the golden hill No softer than a white moth's wing, ...in the light, upon the sill For the breath of love you share with me, is more than I can say The depth of love I hold for you, ....will keep the sun away
_________________________________________________ 2//6/15 Revised 12/1/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/6/2016 10:33:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your "VALENTINE POEM OF YOUR CHOICE win!!!" LINDA
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Date: 2/5/2016 6:44:00 PM
beautiful Carrie...although from what i remember your poetry always was so well written! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/5/2016 7:49:00 AM
Greetings Carrie. Congrats for your #1 placement with this awesome piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/3/2016 11:26:00 AM
Lovely poem, Carrie. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/3/2016 8:42:00 AM
Well-deserved win, Carrie. The sentiment is both tender and striking.
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Date: 2/3/2016 3:31:00 AM
Superb Poem...And congrats for winning the Contest....Loved it.
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Date: 2/3/2016 3:12:00 AM
How lovely Carrie. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win my friend!
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Date: 2/2/2016 10:48:00 PM
Hi Carrie, Congratulations on your Valentine win. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 2/2/2016 10:00:00 PM
I am in love again ... so romantic. Enjoyed reading ... you made me feel it. Cheers, Bobby
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Date: 2/2/2016 9:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win...beautiful write
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Date: 2/2/2016 5:45:00 PM
Absolutely stunning Carrie many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/2/2016 5:35:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful! Soft, tender, romantic, flows well. I just love it. Congratulations on your #1 win. A 7
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Date: 2/2/2016 5:18:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on your top placement in the contest!! Very well deserved! *smiles*-luloo
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Date: 2/2/2016 5:03:00 PM
Very beautiful heartfelt couplets, Congratulations of winning the contest. Well deserved.
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:53:00 AM
Hi Carrie. You poem is just wonderful and full of great imagery. The rhymes and the flow of the words made it a pleasure to read. This is a great love that you speak of my friend.....Robert.
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Date: 2/9/2015 2:49:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..It has winner writtten on it for sure. Thanks for stopping by..Your words were uplifting.. Sara
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Date: 2/8/2015 9:27:00 AM
Awesome! GL in the contest.
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Date: 2/7/2015 9:24:00 PM
Stunning as always, Carrie. I predict a very high place for this one!!
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Date: 2/7/2015 10:41:00 AM
Awesome Carrie..true essence of the theme 'Breath of Love' portrayed..God bless. Love
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Date: 2/7/2015 6:36:00 AM
This is just so beautiful Carrie! I loved it I really did!...Hugs, Deb
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Date: 2/7/2015 2:44:00 AM
Nice one:-)
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Date: 2/6/2015 8:36:00 PM
Beautiful work and much enjoyed. Thanks.
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