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A valentine poem 1

A valentine poem

YOU and I just do not make up a TWO
ARE we not already one, as it WERE
MINE is a life surely with yours ENTWINED
FOR no other pair would’ve loved each other MORE
EVER to remain so, and to fail NEVER.

Encoded Message: “ You are mine for ever. Never more entwined were two”. 
(The message is decoded by putting together the first words of the lines in the order in which they appear and the last words in the reverse order.)

Form: Acrostic
13th Jan 13

For Suzette Crous’ “My valentine” contest (with a coded secret message)

Now.. entry for PD's 'Valentine poem' contest...dated 14 Feb 13

S.Jagathsimhan Nair.

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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 5:07:00 PM
    Congrats, Jag. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 5:04:00 AM
    - A sweet Valentine's poems, it had to win! - CONGRATULATIONS, JAG !! - Have a beautiful Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 10:44:00 PM
    Big congratulations my dear friend SJ for your very sweet and unique write and double fantastic win!! I enjoyed reading again your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 6:08:00 PM
    very creative...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 4:40:00 PM
    Well done, I like the hidden message. Congrats on win.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:35:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:18:00 PM
    Congratulations a very fine win, Jag!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 2:14:00 PM
    Jag, CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your lovely and wonderful poem. always & forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 8:55:00 AM
    hi my dearest frined JAG.. how i adore your kindness and supports.. thanks for always submit your encouragement and comments.. appreciate is so much... and Happy Valentine always.. <3 <3 <3 luv and hugs :) Sk

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 8:00:00 AM
    congrats !very well written.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 9:00:00 AM
    Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw that you view another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much.

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 6:51:00 AM
    Very creative Indeed! Congrats!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 9:54:00 PM
    Congratulations for a very creative and lovely Valentines Poem and awesome win my dear friend, SJ! Thanks for sharing it, too! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 8:51:00 PM
    A very creative poem and congratulations on your number one win!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 6:20:00 PM
    Congrats Nair on this very creative write, xxx

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 4:46:00 PM
    Good day Jag... congratulations in Suzette's sweet sweet " VALENTINE" contest. Always & forever * LINDA

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 1:40:00 PM
    Congratulations on your Ist Place win with this beauty! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 10:30:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win in this contest it wasn't an easy challenge! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 9:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your first place win! Well deserved!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 9:16:00 AM
    Wow.......this was clever !!! Great job!!