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A Unicorn Walks Into a Bar

He walks into the bar Like a movie star With swagger Out pouring the lager Topped by a mop Of such mythical proportion It hushes the crowd With its absorption More adorn Than a unicorn Waving a pompadour As big as a brontosaur 9/3/2019 Swagger Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Anna Hopper

Date: 10/4/2019 9:33:00 AM

Lol! I love it! You once said you couldn’t rhyme! Well done!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/7/2019 8:09:00 AM

Did I? Well, ok, I'm not good a scheming ;). abca whats?

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/3/2019 6:34:00 PM

How cute is this - love the tone of imagination as delivered. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/7/2019 8:07:00 AM

Thank CayCay! Hugs~ xomo

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 9/25/2019 7:16:00 PM

A much loved unicorn. Swaggering in a bar, result of the lager? Who knew? Great poem, Congrats!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/26/2019 6:57:00 AM

A chicken or egg thing I think ;), Thank you Sandra! xomo

Heather Crismond

Date: 9/25/2019 9:44:00 AM

I would of loved this poem just because of the title. But the description of swagger triggered so many hilarious memories I laughed out loud. Startling my poor dogs;) Fantastic poem!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/25/2019 4:31:00 PM

Lol! Comes around goes around: how many times have I been startled by the dogs thinking someone's at the door. Delighted to stir up such big hair memories! :))) xomo!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/17/2019 7:39:00 AM

Something is wrong if you do not turn this into a song. The title deserves more press.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/25/2019 4:08:00 PM

Giggles! Maybe I should ;), xomo!

Lewis Raynes

Date: 9/15/2019 8:39:00 PM

absolutely taken with this title, can visualise this happening. lol. much better than a horse.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/16/2019 7:37:00 AM

Tee hee, I was LMAO when I thought of the title ;) ...he was a stud for sure~ xomo!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/12/2019 8:45:00 AM

What a great name for a yellow trike and a cool back story.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/12/2019 8:59:00 AM

There's videos of him, an impressive beast! He was retired due to his trademark move, whipping his head back and knocking out cowboys... why you see some of them wearing hockey face masks.

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/9/2019 7:54:00 AM

You have the swagger like Mick Jagger lol...loved it Mo...^WW^ :o)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/9/2019 8:01:00 AM

Giggles! With my head an egg like Sinead. ;D, Hugs! xomo

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/8/2019 8:30:00 PM

LOL... I can picture your unicorn and the stunned silence of the patrons. Great humour!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/9/2019 7:30:00 AM

Giggles ;), obviously it was a mainstream bar. Hugs! xomo <3

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 9/7/2019 8:10:00 PM

Hahahaa! ;D LOVE this... another FAV! ;)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/9/2019 7:28:00 AM

Tee hee ;), Thank You Rhona!!! xomo <3

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/7/2019 7:50:00 AM

Hi Maureen, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on placement in the contest. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/9/2019 7:27:00 AM

Thank you Alexis! Hope you are well my friend, hugs! xomo

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/7/2019 7:48:00 AM

What a great image you created. Love it. Congrats Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/9/2019 7:26:00 AM

Thank you Jeanne! :) xomo!

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/6/2019 7:55:00 PM

A cool, fun read and a true delight my friend.... The imagery is awesome...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/9/2019 7:25:00 AM

Thank you my friend. I hope you are well. Hugs and warm thoughts, xomo!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/6/2019 4:08:00 PM

This is a fantastic gem, should be a top winner!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/9/2019 7:24:00 AM

Thank you Michelle! xomo <3

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/6/2019 11:31:00 AM

This was simply amazing Mo! Your pen inks gold ! This was such s fun read! Good luck in the contest but I know it's a winner!;)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/9/2019 7:22:00 AM

Thank you lovely :))) xomo!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/5/2019 8:43:00 AM

This is swagabodacious. Good luck in the contest.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/5/2019 11:34:00 AM

I love that! My big yellow trike is named Bodacious after the champion bucking bull Dodge Bodacious ;D, Thank you! xomo!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/4/2019 7:09:00 PM

How cool this would be ;)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/5/2019 6:51:00 AM

Seriously! ;D, Hugs! xomo

Indiana Shaw

Date: 9/4/2019 9:19:00 AM

No No No, save my sanity please, only you could come up that Maureen, someone please, please wipe me up off the floor . . . ; )

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/5/2019 6:50:00 AM

You're awesome <3

Charles Messina

Date: 9/4/2019 8:30:00 AM

LOL.. If it makes you feel any better Mo, I never dated a pompadour myself. But then again, I've never dated any suave dudes either. Nice one! Good luck in the contest. Charlie

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/5/2019 6:49:00 AM

Giggles ;D, I dated a guy once with such gorgeous locks he was photographed for a shampoo company ad, no joke! xomo

Eric Ashford

Date: 9/4/2019 8:17:00 AM

LOL Goo-un. Not so old bar joke!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/5/2019 6:47:00 AM

You can take the joke out of the bar but not the bar out of the joke ;), Thankya! xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 9/4/2019 6:29:00 AM

I have to say OUCH. Watch where you're pointing that horn. Just because you're mythical and mystical... well look at your brontosaur thing; they went extinct. He cockily responds, "Did they?" Hurumph maureen, I know nothing about the judging of these contests, but this is a winner in my book!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/4/2019 7:13:00 AM

Tee hee ;), While I have dated some suave dudes, never landed me a pompadour. Thank you Jeff! Let's hope Line likes it. xomo

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 9/4/2019 1:12:00 AM

You've got to love a unicorn, such fun Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/4/2019 7:17:00 AM

What girl in their right mind doesn't? ;D, Hugs n' giggles! xomo