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A Twist of Fate Hlm

black clouds in the blue started raining cats and dogs submerging the roads A man was walking in rain queerly. Mocking at running men unfairly An umbrella he had. But ill-luck made him sad. Wind upturned it; he was drenched merely. fate does strange twists; no remedies for; one should stop giving oneself airs. Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku Poetry Contest Monoku poetry form only. Sponsored by: Charles Messina Date:31-01-2021. Placed : 2nd

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Date: 3/16/2022 7:35:00 PM
Dear Patri, sorry it took so long to comment on this fun write (loved the limerick) You did well combining these forms...Belated Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings...Charlie
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 3/17/2022 6:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Date: 3/13/2022 4:26:00 AM
I have read your winning work and was delighted that it is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 3/13/2022 9:40:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem. Very glad for the compliments.
Date: 3/11/2022 5:00:00 AM
Winds upturning the umbrella. Happens during every monsoon. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 3/13/2022 9:38:00 AM
Thank you so much for the best compliments.

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