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A Tribute To a Major Appliance

R emember how E ffortlessly your F ather would R emove his I cy cold beer before G ame Time? E ach can was R ippling with an A phrodesiac of T he fermented grain. O h, how I still R emember those S ips he let me have...

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/13/2015 1:06:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write Dan!

Dan Cwiak
Date: 10/13/2015 6:42:00 AM

Thank you, Upma. There have been many times that I was stumped on a theme, but this one just seem to work when I remember those sips of beer. I appreciate your stopping to give me your comments.

Skat A

Date: 10/10/2015 12:07:00 PM

Dan, Congrats on your wonderful win. **SKAT**

Dan Cwiak
Date: 10/13/2015 6:39:00 AM

Thanks, Skat. I appreciate your read and your words.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/9/2015 5:34:00 PM

Dan, I love your way of thinking congratulations on your win!!! Enjoyed reading

Dan Cwiak
Date: 10/13/2015 6:35:00 AM

Thanks, Eve. It just came to me when I thought of the beer my dad used to keep in there.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/9/2015 2:59:00 PM

Very clever take on the theme, Dan! I really enjoyed your very smooth Acrostic that reads like a mini-story! I remember those days too! Congrats on your win!

Dan Cwiak
Date: 10/13/2015 6:33:00 AM

Thank you, Sandra...I didn't realize my father was giving you sips of his beer too! lol I appreciate the read and your words.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/9/2015 1:01:00 PM

Now, this is original.What a nice memory..nothing wrong with a sip, in my humble opinion. congrats..you have talent. BG

Dan Cwiak
Date: 10/13/2015 6:31:00 AM

Thanks, Barbara. I appreciate you stopping by to read this and for your comments.

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/9/2015 10:03:00 AM

So clever are you!! I love your twist !! And a big congratulations well deserved, Dan !!

Dan Cwiak
Date: 10/9/2015 11:04:00 AM

Thanks, Carrie. I had to have that memory come out, and this was the perfect forum.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/9/2015 9:06:00 AM

Congratulations! CayCay

Dan Cwiak
Date: 10/9/2015 11:01:00 AM

Thanks, CayCay. I'm still searching for that #1 spot, but at least I have found some of my voice.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2015 4:56:00 AM

love the clever acrostic form you used Dan - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Dan Cwiak
Date: 10/9/2015 10:59:00 AM

Thanks, Jan. I do remember the sips he gave me...or I would sneak.

Julia Ward

Date: 9/30/2015 12:41:00 PM

That's good, Dan. GL for the contest.

Dan Cwiak
Date: 9/30/2015 2:29:00 PM

Thanks, Julia.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/16/2015 7:13:00 PM

You are a very clever writer ... CayCay

Dan Cwiak
Date: 9/30/2015 2:31:00 PM

I should have sent you a this thank you before, but better late than never...lol.

John Lawless

Date: 9/14/2015 8:46:00 AM

A very interesting take on the theme and the simplicity of memories triggers..

Dan Cwiak
Date: 10/9/2015 10:34:00 AM

Thanks John. It seems that memories are all I have left...lol.