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Visuals and music were exquisite Sunsets elicit a sensation of surrender Poetic lyrics buried amid lovely valleys Where aspirations and ambitions are born Promises that are as transitory as a breeze Aspirations cling to creek bottoms Just beyond the reach of terrible truths Despite this awareness, one feels obliged To fall totally lost in that moment They were dipping their toes in the mud Unable to withstand the allure of the present.
Written: May 24, 2023

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Date: 5/24/2023 8:35:00 PM
Beautiful and arresting is the poem. The visual of the lovely valley where gulmohars have burst into bloom stirs sensations of delight
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Date: 5/24/2023 3:35:00 PM
Very mystical and enticing, Lasaad. Wonderful imagery and deeply stirring of the senses and emotions. A poem to reread and think about. Absolutely mgnificent tree in the photo. A FAV for me, my dear friend. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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