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A Travelling Sage

There once was a travelling sage Who yet lived to a very old age. Well becoming quite senile, With problems (yes penile), The reader may choose: 1) He kept his packed trunk in a cage. or 2) He packed his wee trunk in a rage.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/6/2013 7:43:00 PM
This is creative and fun. Full of humor and chuckles. cute and silly. nice job
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Date: 3/21/2013 2:55:00 AM
Great fun to read
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Date: 1/14/2013 10:28:00 AM
LOL, love the reader's choice punchline too - number two, I think : )
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Date: 9/30/2012 8:18:00 AM
can't decide. Your mind can be dangerous.
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Date: 9/27/2012 6:35:00 PM
yep, number two!!!
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Date: 9/27/2012 12:15:00 PM
AGAIN LIKE AN OLD TALE COOL WRITE DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 9/26/2012 10:32:00 PM
The second for me is definitely the better choice. But does it matter if it's packed or unpacked? Just saying "packed" makes for a better beat!!
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 9/27/2012 1:39:00 PM
Thanks for the opinion and advice, Andrea! I've fixed it according to your inspiration... Terry
Date: 9/26/2012 2:19:00 PM
lol, love your limericks : )
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Date: 9/25/2012 8:59:00 AM
humorus.....
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Date: 9/25/2012 12:38:00 AM
Hahaha...enjoyed this funny Limerick very much!
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Date: 9/24/2012 9:57:00 PM
This is hilarious. Wonderful Limerick
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Date: 9/24/2012 6:36:00 PM
I have a couple of extra lines for you. His ruddy trunk turning beige. His shrunken compartments could no longer engage.
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