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A Transformation Begins

Fishing masters Clothed in white feathers... They stalk in slow motion And as they strike a pose Everything rare and beautiful. Round my heart and soul of bliss A transformation begins, At peace I am. Constance Motif: spiritual and nature (Great White Egrets) 02/27/2014 For contest, "Impress me with a Small Poem" by Giorgio A. V.

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/2/2014 4:03:00 PM

such a soothing melody, connie... well expressed!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/28/2014 12:17:00 PM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Connie. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/2/2014 8:36:00 AM

Anne thank your for the visit and for the congratulations. Much appreciated - Connie

Skat A

Date: 2/28/2014 11:37:00 AM

impressive win Connie............SKAT

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/2/2014 8:37:00 AM

Skat thank you for the visit and congratulations. Much appreciated. I hope you're having a grand weekend - Connie

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/28/2014 10:46:00 AM

I love this......... we see the egrets from driving along the highway near our home, ....perched out in the grain fields. What a nice reminder this is!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/2/2014 8:38:00 AM

Carrie thank you for the visit and lovely comment. I hope you're having a wonderful weekend - Connie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/28/2014 8:40:00 AM

Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, connie

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/2/2014 8:40:00 AM

Dr. Ram thank you for the visit and congrats. Much appreciated. I hope you're having a wonderful weekend - Connie

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/28/2014 8:30:00 AM

Congrats Connie on the win . A brilliant one indeed.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/2/2014 8:42:00 AM

Kayods thank you for the visit and congrats. I'm humbled that you thought it was brilliant. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend - Connie

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/28/2014 12:01:00 AM

This is a beautifully written nature write my friend! You have delved into a spectacular poem! I really loved reading this harmonious piece this evening! The splendor of this amazing poem is focused upon here Connie! Great Work!!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/2/2014 8:44:00 AM

Russell thank you for the visit and lovely comment. I'm humbled. I hope you're having a wonderful weekend -Connie