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What if there was a passage way down to the ocean Tucked away within the wall an eroded cave Cool breeze always in motion as azure, Turquoise Ocean swirls Breathing in deep reflecting a show of rainbow mist as waves break the cliff face A cave perfect for a dining room full of stunning unremarkable furnishings White cotton linens, accent with fresh-cut blooms, and small center table lamps Pale turquoise ribbon fastening place settings and napkins Dinnerware and dishes embossed shells and starfish dusted in sandy bronze Swim in a sea of pale turquoise Providing guest with genuine friendly, welcoming staff Chef de cuisine creating a gourmet menu of incredibly fresh ocean delicacies I'd call it " A Touch of Ocean Breeze" Prices that everyone can afford; Fried or clams, stuff with c Fried shrimp r a @ b m e Salmon, Clam a chowder, Tuna, t Lobster Oysters Varity of wines So much more Pleasant and accommodating You won’t be disappointed 9/28/2016 My imaginary restaurant - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 10/6/2016 4:27:00 AM
Fantastic, congratulations, Kai
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Date: 10/5/2016 5:13:00 PM
Your poem is so inventive Eve! I was very impressed. I loved your entry and I would've placed it a top winner. Including your fish shape was genius! Congratulations on your win! ; ) 7
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Date: 10/5/2016 5:28:00 PM
thank you, Connie, I love you for your wonderful inspiring comment. Hugs
Date: 10/4/2016 6:08:00 AM
Well, Eve this is just perfect. I like this restaurant a lot. The scene you have described is truely magnificent. Wow...... You have chosen great domain for this restaurant. Nice work. All the best and congratulation.
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Date: 10/3/2016 7:38:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your fine placement in the contest, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/3/2016 8:12:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra :-) Hugs
Date: 10/3/2016 10:41:00 AM
Congrats!!! my friend...let's dine lol...god bless...^WW^
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/3/2016 8:11:00 PM
Thank you, ^WW^ Hugs :-)
Date: 10/3/2016 10:36:00 AM
Hi Eve, Wouldn't that be something? A passageway down to the ocean. This restaurant sounds mesmerizing and alluring. And the foods sounds fantastic . Congratulations on your second place win. It was well deserved :-) Alexis
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Date: 10/3/2016 8:10:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis :-) Hugs
Date: 10/3/2016 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement Eve, lovely write! Sounds like a wonderland in the oceans, wish to pay a visit here! fabulous!!enjoyed , love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/3/2016 8:09:00 PM
Thank you, Anulaxmi :-) Hugs
Date: 10/3/2016 8:18:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Eve
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Date: 10/3/2016 8:08:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph :-) Hugs
Date: 10/3/2016 8:16:00 AM
Back to say congratulations, Mrs. Eve, on your placement. Got any leftovers?
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Date: 10/3/2016 8:07:00 PM
Thank you Daniel :-) Hugs
Date: 10/3/2016 7:34:00 AM
love the shape sweet Eve! congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/3/2016 8:06:00 PM
Thank you, Laura Hugs
Date: 10/1/2016 5:54:00 AM
Your vision for this restaurant is brilliant Eve...Great write...
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Date: 10/3/2016 8:05:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph :-) Hugs
Date: 10/1/2016 3:51:00 AM
Wow, love your restaurant, Eve:) this one will definitely win:)
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Date: 10/3/2016 8:04:00 PM
Thank you, Jo :-) Hugs
Date: 9/29/2016 7:11:00 PM
Oh, Eve, I adore your restaurant! How wonderful to be secluded with the beautiful ocean in this creative place to eat and relax. I believe this will be high on the winner's list! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/29/2016 9:33:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Sandra, for the inspirational complement :-) Hugs
Date: 9/29/2016 7:50:00 AM
Wonderful ... Metaphorical first two stanzas took me by surprise ...
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Date: 9/29/2016 9:37:00 PM
Thank you, Probir:-) Hugs Eve
Date: 9/29/2016 6:37:00 AM
ohh, i would love to hang around this resto, eve... such a vivid, sumptuous piece!..huggs
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Date: 9/29/2016 9:35:00 PM
Thank you, Nette, Hugs
Date: 9/28/2016 11:01:00 PM
I'm not much for seafood...but I'll try your under the sea restaurant Eve....sounds like a great hide away...are there any mermaids ? lol...^WW^
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Date: 9/28/2016 11:46:00 PM
the mermaids are the staff .... Thank you , ^WW^ , I'm allergic to shell fish a variety of fish. : ) Hugs Eve
Date: 9/28/2016 9:45:00 PM
Reserve me a table Mrs Eve. I'll be having some of that seafood. I think I'm going to go raid the fridge. The ocean would be the perfect place for this restaurant.
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/28/2016 10:35:00 PM
I will do so,, I love the ocean and the coast line they are just breath taking... :) Hugs Eve
Date: 9/28/2016 7:00:00 PM
yummmmy Eve! Loved this one :) Good luck lovely Eve :)-luloo
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Date: 9/28/2016 10:36:00 PM
Thank you, Laura, for all your inspiring writes of praise :) Hugs Eve
Date: 9/28/2016 6:48:00 PM
Oh now I'm hungry. Can I get a reservation at 8.
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/28/2016 6:58:00 PM
Yes you may :)

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