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A Tormented Haze

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A Tormented Haze

in a haze of torment

a dozen thoughts raging within

helpless, lost

alone in the crowd

searching for that better way

for that less harsh day

and for that pristine, unattainable moment

when the torment and the strife and the rage and the sorrow and the loss and the wretchedness of the dark helplessness within

fades into nothingness

and vanishes into the distance

far, 

so very far away...

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 12:33:00 PM
    SCRIBBLER, congratulations with your awesome and wonderful poem. Always~ Linda

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    Date: 3/23/2013 2:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much, Linda :-) for your warmest words! It is wonderful to belong to a commonly shared space like Poetry Soup. Thanks again and peace and good wishes to you and all fellow super-Soup-ers ;-)
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 8:56:00 PM
    You did a great job, Scribbler! I love this verse! Congratulations on your win! Ruben.

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    Date: 3/23/2013 5:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so very much, Ruben! I am honoured to be a part of the Poetry Soup family! Stay well!
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 7:05:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

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    Date: 3/23/2013 5:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ever so kindly, Debbie! It is an honour, and a privilege to be a small part of this wonderful collective that is Poetry Soup. Keep well and warmest wishes!