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Gesture

It was a token gesture A hand he offered me Emerging from my cab Stormy night in the city I didn’t know his name But I’ll not forget his face For he helped me gently To a safer place Blue eyes and thick black hair He stepped in the rain-filled gutter To close the taxi door But not a word did he utter Just a simple kindness Like those of olden days When gentlemen ensured Ladies’ safety always Now I’m a modern gal And oh-so independent But I stared in awe At my hero so resplendent As he turned to walk away My impulse was to give a hug But I just touched his jacket And gave his sleeve a tug “Thank you,” I whispered Captivated by his smile And how I wished within my heart That he would stay awhile He simply waved, then walked on Disappearing into the rain Since that night I’ve prayed I’d meet this man again But this kind token gesture Recalled courtesies now rare And I am pleased to say Such tokens gents still share *March 22, 2021

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Date: 10/18/2022 1:29:00 AM
Heartfelt poem so nicely written.
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Date: 7/3/2021 6:11:00 AM
Father's pass this on to sons, I was lucky, good one, Carolyn
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Date: 5/3/2021 6:36:00 PM
What a superb story in a poem! Yes, only few nowadays could give such gestures of a gentleman...This poem takes me back to good old days.. Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 5/3/2021 6:35:00 PM
What a superb story in a poem! Yes, only few nowadays could give such gestures of a gentleman...This poem takes me back to good old days.. Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 3/30/2021 4:16:00 PM
Really kind gesture, Carolyn. Enjoyed reading the story. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 3/28/2021 1:28:00 PM
this is REALLY nice, Carolyn. I mean, that was a difficult challenge and you met it very well. Such men today are almost as rare as needles in a haystack! They don't even stand to give women a seat on the bus.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/28/2021 3:25:00 PM
I don't really expect niceties like this anymore, Andrea. That's why this gent's kindness stood out. Thanks for reading, Carolyn
Date: 3/27/2021 12:07:00 PM
And it seems very rare that you meet one of these anymore; well penned, beautiful read.
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Date: 3/26/2021 2:31:00 PM
Could this perhaps have been a dream? Women are changing the world, I do believe for the better, but relationships are also being changed as a consequence.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 5/4/2021 10:32:00 AM
It actually happened, Peter, the last time I was in New York. Women have fought hard to be seen as equals, but something special was lost along the way...
Date: 3/26/2021 2:02:00 PM
A really beautiful pen Carolyn, when you come across people like you did it's like an angel in disguise. Lovely rhyme and flow with insightful thought too. Blessings and hugs, Gordon
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/26/2021 2:12:00 PM
Every now and then we come across an "angel" like this one, Gordon. I wish there were more of them. Thanks for reading!
Date: 3/26/2021 12:24:00 PM
Love at first sight? I'm impartial. Can happen but don't really believe in it. Still courtesy is so important these days.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/26/2021 12:36:00 PM
Just an attraction, Victor. Love takes time. I've found people in my neighborhood are very courteous and it's always appreciated.
Date: 3/25/2021 8:35:00 PM
Hello Carolyn ... very good reminding topic and well written Carolyn - thank you - Lindsay
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/26/2021 1:43:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Lindsay.
Date: 3/25/2021 4:12:00 PM
It is nice to have a gentlemen treat a lady like a lady. Good rhythm, rhyme and flow in this one. Reads like a good contender in the contest to me. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/26/2021 9:59:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comments, Sara. It's a memory from a brief encounter in New York City.
Date: 3/25/2021 3:31:00 PM
WoW! Carolyn, You've penned such a lovely write about a brief encounter. You painted such a memorable scene with the words you chose. I could just picture it. It was like I was watching a good movie that I didn't want to end. I found it to be romantic as well.Best wishes in the contest. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/26/2021 10:00:00 AM
You're so sweet, Alexis. Just wish I had seen him again.
Date: 3/25/2021 1:25:00 PM
carolyn - this is wonderful!!! i agree with you and love the way you've described this experience. best of luck in the contest - sounds like a winner to me...
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/26/2021 10:01:00 AM
Thanks for reading, Ilene.
Date: 3/25/2021 1:13:00 PM
I like the sexual tension that vibrates throughout this poem. Your picture added to the intrigue.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/26/2021 1:41:00 PM
Couldn't find the photo I was seeking, but am glad this one works, Richard. Thanks for reading!
Date: 3/25/2021 11:51:00 AM
Enjoyed as well-written, but the illustration makes one wonder if he was afraid of being stabbed by those stiletto heels, or that you would topple over in the rain? Reminds me of johnny Mathis', "A Certain Smile" ......Aloha! Rico
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/26/2021 11:20:00 AM
I know you'll love it! Aloha! Rico
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/25/2021 1:09:00 PM
I'll have to listen to that song. Love Johnny Mathis!
Date: 3/25/2021 6:17:00 AM
That moment etched in your memory, so beautifully adorns this poem my friend. A simple, yet elegant tribute to kindness, this poem is. Enjoyed the gentle tone and flow Carolyn. Into my FAVES.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/25/2021 1:08:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay! Hope you post some new poems soon.
Date: 3/25/2021 4:57:00 AM
Sounds good that such gentlemen still exist, beautiful poem, Carolyn:)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/26/2021 1:43:00 PM
There are still some men like this out there. Always a pleasure to come across them. Thanks for reading!
Date: 3/24/2021 9:49:00 PM
Superb! Enjoyed the read. These days, more wolves than gentlemen! Good luck for the contest!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/26/2021 10:28:00 AM
In Florida, we have a large elderly population and they do seem to be more courteous. Thanks for reading!
Date: 3/24/2021 8:53:00 PM
Oh nicely done Careolyn. Around here I am always so impressed when a gentleman opens a door or helps me in some way. These days men are often tentative about such niceties because some women get insulted and want to do it themselves to show their independence. I always say thank you and show my appreciation. I may be an old woman but I'm still a woman and like to be treated that way. Good job. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/25/2021 1:11:00 PM
I guess we get what we wanted when men do not perform these niceties. I've never been insulted that way. Thanks for reading, Judy.
Date: 3/24/2021 8:29:00 PM
Carolyn, this is a beautiful piece of writing. I loved the form you took, and it really flowed all the way to the end. Now, you have me wondering why this perfect stranger stopped to help. Rare these days, yes. Best of luck in the contest.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/25/2021 1:10:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Milton. Sometimes men still hold doors open and perform other acts of kindness.
Date: 3/24/2021 6:50:00 PM
Carolyn, I enjoyed reading your poem! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/26/2021 10:35:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. I'll check your page.
Date: 3/24/2021 5:58:00 PM
Wow, Carolyn. So beautifully penned. I have to FAVE this gem ~
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/25/2021 1:08:00 PM
Big thanks, Line. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Something similar happened to me when I visited New York.

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