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A Toast

Of simple rolls to playfully wisp to a beauty of a lovers kiss to forgetting the day, as children at play to knowing where to be, but still to stay to simple words with complex meanings to living life's fantasy, so near to dreaming to being disorganized, and out of sorts to keeping things beautiful, and short of course

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/8/2014 10:45:00 PM
Forgot the 7 for you Ian! :)
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Date: 12/8/2014 9:54:00 PM
Cannot fault this poem, I like the couplet form used too. Keep writing on Carol
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Date: 12/8/2014 9:21:00 PM
Very nice rhymes verses, Ian, dear friend! Truly enjoyed it! A 7 for you! Have a lovely day! :) Love and hugs! .xxx D.
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