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A Time When You Could Eat the Sun

The trees are made of feathers and sticks The sun is made of golden cheese The moon was made of whipped cream A place where the water was made out of blue Kool- Aid The grass was made of gummy green strings There was no houses and no place to hide A place where a boy ate the sun A place where the Moon swalloed up the world A tragedy that melted and turned to liquid No one could swim in the sea No one could tan underneath the branches A world where time stood still and the hours were long A place where humans never existed "Please Try to Go Beyond Earth Hour" Treat earth like something you imagined when you were a kid a place where these things happened and you could be safe. Pick up your trash and clean up your yard! after all this is your world too :)!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/11/2012 3:11:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2012 9:27:00 AM
congrats on the contest placement.. WHAT AGR8 WAY TO APPROACH THE THEME!!!!!!!!
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Date: 5/11/2012 9:26:00 AM
congrats on the contest placement
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Date: 5/11/2012 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nikko's "Beyond Earth" contest Shayla. Love, Carol
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 5/11/2012 7:05:00 AM
thank you
Date: 5/11/2012 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your Earth Hour win Shayla xx
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 5/11/2012 7:05:00 AM
thank you
Date: 5/11/2012 3:28:00 AM
Shayla congrats on your win..David
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 5/11/2012 7:05:00 AM
thank you :D

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