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A Thunderous Silence

Her memories had her waiting for his oft' tardy appearance, and in her patient time perhaps wondering, "Has he ever noticed the scar below my kneecap?" His litany of lateness' was covered by a bond of mutually assured affection. She'd never hold him to a sundial. And in those times together, four eyes flickering with a lingering seep of memory; each owning a piece of time, holding it to savor, watching her, pleased more by her company than any assistance, silence seemed to have been there, waiting for them. And in that moment's breathless anticipation his realization was; he'd wait an hour to watch her mouth, the scintillating way words unspooled from her lips.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/10/2012 8:16:00 AM
I truly enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Chuck. I hope you have an amazing weekend. Love, Carol
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Chuck Novotny
Date: 2/10/2012 8:59:00 AM
It will be amazing. The weddings of friends always inspire my pen. Thank you for your compliment. Chuck
Date: 2/9/2012 1:55:00 PM
Chuck, this is a wery good poem,that I like very much. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Chuck Novotny
Date: 2/10/2012 9:00:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 2/9/2012 1:42:00 PM
wow! this is an impressive piece of writing. i love the kneecap question and the last 3 lines the most. the unspooling words is such a great image!
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Chuck Novotny
Date: 2/10/2012 9:01:00 AM
Some of my best words are the remembered experiences shared with others. Thank you Ilene

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