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A Thousand Whispers

A thousand whispers, extracted from my mouth Wholly, my breath slowly drawn from me Mine eyes closed, they appear like honey to see Catching your deep gaze, as words go south What was your name? Please don’t pout Wet kisses I remember, the best Biting gently on my lower lip, messes With my head and makes me swoon, no doubt Strong hands did find course to mine To clasp and grasp and ever increase This rising heart, burning up my torso My body blushing like California wine In sight there will be no cease Wanton desire, growing ever more so

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Dan Kearley

Date: 7/29/2013 11:53:00 AM

Goosebumps! That's all I can say.. Ha-ha. Very nice. And I have to thank you for stopping by with the kind comment on my kiss poem... I'm glad you enjoyed it. :o)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2013 6:59:00 PM

wow, so much better than the kiss I described. That sounds awesome!! great line on california wine

Andrea Travis
Date: 8/2/2013 10:11:00 PM

Thanks for taking the time to send me these kind words! One comment, and I aim to keep my pencil sharp and paper handy! Working on different forms is presenting a lack of something in my work. All being first tries, I endeavor to keep at it! Thanks again, your talent is an inspiration! Andrea, p.s. great name (means feminine) as I'm sure you know!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/27/2013 5:33:00 PM

Beautiful piece you have scribed. Xxx Michael

Andrea Travis
Date: 8/2/2013 10:05:00 PM

Thank you very much for taking the time to comment on my poem! It's comments like these that keep me writing! Thanks again for the kind words! andreatravis

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 7/26/2013 11:44:00 PM

Ps., 'A Thousand Whispers, Extracted From My Mouth.' Quite Wonderful As Creative, Beautiful Andrea. I Am Going To Favour This Magnificent Verse From Depths Yet Found As Also Your Beauty's Self.

Andrea Travis
Date: 7/27/2013 3:56:00 PM

P.S. I read aloud at an event last night for the first time, completely unprepared! Of course it had to be after the readings of 3 of the most famous poets in my area. My selections were anything but well chosen! Your kind comments are enough for me! I will keep sharpening my pencil and keep trying to find that one stanza that will touch or inspire. Thanks again!

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 7/26/2013 11:38:00 PM

† I Love Your Beauty's Passion. 'California Wine,' I'll Take Some Cheese And Make It White ˜ Love, John

Andrea Travis
Date: 7/27/2013 3:49:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words! I always try to write what I know, but of late, I am trying to draw out some passions of long ago. For passion is in short supply these days for me. I have been studying poetic forms and getting lost in the rules, instead of my passions. I feel my work is suffering. Your feedback is wonderfully welcomed!