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A Thoughtful Destination

What i see when I look into your eyes is indescribable So captivating and admirable everything becomes timeless Your personality is like the journey and your mind the destination the beauty of your beauty is more than you being beautiful As the journey embarks I find it suitable to rest in your sweet voice No rush at arriving as there are sights to see Your eyes fuel me with nutrition and what my body needs And that smile.. Oh that smile! sends my heart on the Tour de' France Racing cuz the start of love found it's habitat in my mind A feeling I'd wish we both can invest in and unwind If I had to put a price on you it'll be less But..Only so that I can afford you. Cuz I have to have you Not for the possession but for the appreciation Your smile alone can heal the depressed in time of need A woman like you is in a recession and so rare to find. When asked what is beauty I think of what's inside A pretty face does not make a pretty soul But yours is gorgeous beyond measure of range Excuse me, as I pay this toll in exchange to pass And continue on to the destination of your mind Cuz the thought of being in your thoughts Is something I could only hope for.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/26/2013 1:08:00 PM
Hmm.. well, I don't think I have ever read such a piece of expressive times ourney through your speech ever.. so what about Luck? and Love.. My middle name is Lu means love and so fortunate to have read your words today. Christ isn't dead. Have a Merry Christmas :) :}
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Date: 12/26/2013 7:56:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Eddie ! - Nice to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/26/2013 12:01:00 AM
Hi Eddie, , Hope you are enjoying the holidays, <3 Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 12/25/2013 11:48:00 PM
Eddie, wow.. That's a deep thought, but it is possible to be stuck in the mind..., I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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