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A Thought

Is it meant to be? But in control, I am not, How I cannot see Wondering all day Your love, ever have I sought Passing time away For you my heart roars With glee, now I cast my lot May it be with yours BB

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/9/2016 2:02:00 PM

enchanting threesome Benjamin.

Benjamin Button
Date: 5/10/2016 6:58:00 AM

Thank you assuming you are speaking poetically

Skat A

Date: 5/9/2016 5:18:00 AM

BenjaminWelcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Benjamin Button
Date: 5/10/2016 7:01:00 AM

Thank for the warm welcome. Is there any significance to the quotation "Hugs*"?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/9/2016 4:52:00 AM

Benjamin, great thought...Linda

Benjamin Button
Date: 5/10/2016 7:01:00 AM

Thanks!