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A Thimble Full

a thimble full smothering in the heated blood of cruelty’s vengeance he found a thimble full of mercy poured it over his aching heart and cursed himself. drowning in the emptiness of drunkenness’ revenge he begged the scoffing passersby for a thimble full of whiskey’s need alone in age’s full, yet empty room he strained against the red glow of shut eyes searching for a thimble full of memory smothering in the heated blood of cruelty’s vengeance drowning in the emptiness of drunkenness’ revenge alone in age’s full, yet empty room he found death’s thimble full of peace. 3/7/2015 submitted to – Love or Hate pick a subject #2 – poetry contest sponsor – Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 3/12/2015 9:18:00 PM
Awesome...congrats on your win John
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Date: 3/12/2015 10:21:00 AM
" thimble full" really intriguing "death’s thimble full of peace" awesome. Congrats on win John...Rajat
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Date: 3/12/2015 3:01:00 AM
Wonderful write John! Congrats on fine win!
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Date: 3/11/2015 3:37:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats John:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/11/2015 2:54:00 PM
Oh that is an awesome and intriguing write, I love unique descriptions that are not over played and that "a thimble full" kept my attention and enjoyment. Grats on your contest placement. This was good :)
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Date: 3/10/2015 9:20:00 PM
congrats on placing John ty for your support hugs
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Date: 3/7/2015 3:53:00 PM
Such deep dark sad imagery John - addiction of any sort can be so destructive. Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 4:12:00 PM
Its amazing what inspires us with our poems - i have absolutely no idea where my pen takes me these days i can write happy and sad one after the other:-) Hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 3/7/2015 4:07:00 PM
Thanks Jan, not where I thought the poem was going but as of late I have been coming in contact with some of the darker side of human nature and its repercussions.

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