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A Thiefs Weapon

He stole her youth. He took it without permission. She let him in. She gave it her all. He knew what he was doing yet he didn't think it through. He knew her type & knew what he would put her through. She blocked everyone out. She always believed in him & thought "Maybe next time it would be different." Until the next time,she wasn't going to be able to get out of it all. He ended her life without any weapon. Stole what he hadn't given to her . She won't be the same,she won't believe another man because he stole all she could give,like a thief in the night. A thief,A murderer! He wasn't ever worthy of her love,the love she gave unconditionally,not once did he stop to think of the consequences of his actions. He was foolish,spiteful & heartless. . You can't go through life hurting someone if all they wanted to give you was their love. BUT She's bigger than you,She serves a greater God that will never abandon his child,for He knows her heart & it ain't one that causes pain yet one that comforts it. . She WILL be okay,but the real question is "Will you ever be okay now that u've faced reality & it's got u at the neck?"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/9/2013 2:37:00 AM
wow... sad emotions poemed sweetly....... welcome to the soup....
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Date: 9/7/2013 8:11:00 PM
Christine, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
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Date: 9/7/2013 5:18:00 AM
Awesome expression and emotions in this poem. Great write
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Date: 9/6/2013 2:03:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Christine ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/5/2013 2:50:00 PM
Straight forward. love it
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Date: 9/5/2013 2:39:00 PM
wow! Christine, glad it turned out this way..,thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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