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~a Thief~good Grief~

Behin' bared doors, beneath yer floors, in cozy dens and caverns deep y'll find me der down under de stair where gutter rats scamper and silverfish sleep. "Who can I be, hmmmm let me see. I be a thief Good Grief!" On to Ol' Town's docks walks Goldylocks decked in de heights a fashion in 'er purse I peeks, I rummage, I sneaks discoverin' coin for me passion! Den off to de park fer another mark, I grimace and frown appearin de clown Whilst signin' for de gang we makes a plan ta break all de rules in de 'ole damn town. Soon der's a tussel wid all of dis muscle den me fingers kin creep in 'is pockets deep grabbin' the loot I's trained ye see yet, what I find i donna na keep. Who can I be, hmmmm let see, I be a thief Good Grief! At Marchant's Oak near Fayrin's rest Down forest paths,through high grass I stalk de traders, cause I loves dem best Why let me see who can I be so crass? Who can I be, hmmmm let see, I be a thief Good Grief! But surin what I find I will na keep Dough stealing be me duty, I'll give ye back whats in yer pack Fer I be an Honorable beauty. And if per chance ye needs a hand Wid opening treasure boxes cutie.. Donna get smart wid some other tart who'll walk off wid yer booty! Just 'ave a cheer fer I be 'ere ~Honoravillana at yer duty!
Dis 'err piece a work be dedicated to de Raven ‘aired beauty name of Constance La France

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/31/2010 8:14:00 PM
Cleverly written, Deborah. Congrats on your win. Dan C
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Date: 8/26/2010 9:55:00 PM
Fun dialect there in your poem, Deb. Clever piece and congrats. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/25/2010 10:33:00 AM
I don't know, Deborah. Upon rereading it, the meter is just a bit off, but with the accent you've chosen to write the poem in, I'd have no idea how to edit it differently. Another thing, though...Your rhyming scheme jumps a bit, as well, but again...don't know if I'd change that either. I'll be back to review more of your work when I get the chance. Thanks for stopping by!
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Date: 8/25/2010 9:07:00 AM
Love the poem...Very creative. Other then the meter being a bit difficult in a few places, I think you've created something special here. Love it. Thanks for your kind comment on my poem.
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Date: 8/23/2010 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Deborah in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "What Are The Rules Again? ". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2010 3:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Deborah! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/22/2010 1:10:00 PM
Great job. Very funny. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/22/2010 10:50:00 AM
I willna be the first to offer kudos..I willna be the last. But the rules say I must! and I gladly do! BG
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Date: 8/22/2010 10:17:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your number one in the 'rules contest'... am married lady now.. cioa..luv..
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Date: 8/21/2010 2:07:00 PM
Well I put in the call letter for your utube video and its bouncing back... page not found.. tell me an easier way .. running out of hours here TEACH..
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Date: 8/21/2010 9:45:00 AM
Sending you a Soup mail re your blog, Deborah.
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Date: 8/20/2010 3:45:00 PM
Deborah, I think Constance wants us to actually write ABOUT the 10 rules you just listed in her blog. Did you see what Joyce wrote?
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Date: 8/20/2010 3:36:00 PM
Deborah, I think you and I both missed Constance's intent, though I LOVE your funny poem very much. I think she wants us to write about the rules for her contest! Look at Joyce Johnson's entry. That's when I got a clue. To double space, just hit the enter bar twice after each line. I added a third space between verses. Please check out mine and Joyce's and let me know if you think I missed the point. Joyce may be right on target! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/20/2010 3:33:00 PM
enjoyed....well done!!
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Date: 8/20/2010 3:24:00 PM
An enjoyable read TEACH.. great presentation and good luck in the contest.. Constance will luv am sure.. its a great piece of expressive poetry ..ciao luv..pupil
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