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A Tear In the Sand

Sitting on a beach Alone I stare out to sea I watch the waves grow and die Endlessly on the rocky shore A single black bird circles above Watching me watching it It speaks to me in words I do not understand Clouds out on the horizon Dark and windswept Edged by gold from the failing sun Flashes of lightening Filling my eyes with fire and pain A newspaper flies by on a tortured wind Carried miles across the water Eventually landing across my legs Black print on white paper Saying that a child has died Killed by abuse and neglect Buried in a shallow grave Left alone by those who “loved” her A tear falls down my cheek Falling into the sand Washed away by the next wave Never to be seen again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/30/2009 10:05:00 AM
A heartbreaking of emotions I felt while reading this perfectly woven together thread.
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Date: 12/25/2008 7:34:00 PM
A harrowing piece... excellent visuals and powerfully expressed emotion, BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/20/2008 11:25:00 PM
Great writing...Moves one to tears...It reminds me of that little girl they just found after several months of her mom double lying in jail. Too many loonies out their that don't even deserve to have children. I hope she gets her just reward. Keep up the splendid writing. Lawrence in Lou. Ky.
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Date: 12/14/2008 2:07:00 PM
Very deep and beautifully written... *Breana*
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Date: 12/14/2008 11:44:00 AM
This s such a beautifully written poem. Vivid imagery and deep felt emotion flow through it, from the beginning to the end. Very moving. Love Robin
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