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A Tale of a Princess

Once upon a day there was A young princess like a bloomy vase A day a night and a year have passed Waiting for this princess to be surpassed A day a night and a year have passed With this princess being just a past Her marvellous beauty was never perceived But once you meet her you feel relieved Her shining eyes were deep black holes Attracting brains and even souls Her hair was strings of a wooden guitar Or sectioned wires from a golden star. All of this beauty went beyond sights Deeper than valleys and higher that heights To a world of awe and glory Where our princess starts a new story Between maids of equal splendour And brave knights who do not easily surrender Her wonder will stay as the eighth Of the seven wonders of human faith

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/29/2009 11:58:00 AM
Mohamed, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 3:06:00 PM
In addtion to your feature congrats, just wanted to add congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:30:00 PM
Congrats!!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2009 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/3/2009 8:49:00 PM
Wonderful tale here, Mohamed !! Wonderful writing and congratulations on having it featured this week here at the Soup!!
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Date: 9/3/2009 4:12:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Nicely written piece. Sara
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Date: 9/3/2009 11:22:00 AM
Lovely poem! Congratulations on getting featured this week.
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Date: 9/2/2009 12:26:00 PM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great Mohammed ! Adeleke
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Date: 9/1/2009 2:10:00 PM
thank u all: nadia, carol, karen, raul , dane and ruben.... best of luck and love to u all
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Date: 9/1/2009 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations, Mohamed, on having your well-written poem featured this week. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 9/1/2009 2:16:00 AM
Mohamed, congratulations on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 8/31/2009 5:36:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery for a whimsical feel. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/31/2009 4:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mohamed. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/22/2009 1:38:00 PM
FASCINATING.
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