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A Sweet Fairytale

Grandma has a pretty flower garden, the big white fence keeps the yard in. I love to pick the colorful flowers, in a vase they last for many hours. Today guess what I saw, a little doggy drinking with a big stripped straw. There was a pink fluffy cat, she wore a big blue and red rose hat. I saw them both standing behind, or was it just in my little mind. Grandma said, my story I should tell and then go to bed. For this would make a sweet fairytale, it should be in a book for sale.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/6/2023 12:18:00 PM

Your lovely fairytale abounds in childhood innocence, delight and beautiful scenes. I enjoyed it a lot. Kindest regards.:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/7/2023 8:03:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this fun fairytale write. It was fun to write. Have a great/fun day......................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/1/2023 4:45:00 AM

This is stunningly sweet., Paula and very much you Panagiota xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/4/2023 12:34:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found this to be sweet. I enjoyed writing it. I hope it put a smile on your face. Have a great/fun day......................

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/30/2023 12:15:00 PM

Hello Paula, your poem is so cute. it made me smile. Hugs. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2023 3:02:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, I am glad I made your day bright. Hugs. /Darlene\

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/30/2023 2:57:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad my fun write made you smile. That made my day. I love to give out smiles. Hugs. Have a great/fun day......................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/29/2023 6:48:00 PM

I see straw men; you see straw dogs! Ha, ha. ~ Kitty Cat

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/30/2023 10:28:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. I took another look and now I see your straw men hiding under the bush. Hahaha.... The little doggy was drinking through a big stripped straw. The pink fluffy Kitty Cat is taking a nap. Have a great/fun day......................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/29/2023 4:17:00 PM

I pray you sell it, its good and its calming for the soul dear friend. You are a treasure, in God's Kingdom, keep blessing us with your poetry Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/30/2023 10:23:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun write. A book??? Maybe an E-Book. I will let you know if I do it. Have a great/fun day......................

Marikate Kingston

Date: 3/29/2023 2:41:00 PM

If it was for sale, I would certainly buy it. Ironically, as I read I thought to myself, this would be fun to illustrate. My favorite line begins with,"a little doggy drinking..." It is so pretty and to me, whimsical.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/30/2023 10:17:00 AM

Thanks for your note. So glad you enjoyed my fun children's write. A book??? I need to think about it. Maybe an E-Book. I will let you know if I do it. Have a great/fun day......................

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/29/2023 10:59:00 AM

Lovely Fairy Tale Paula,

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/29/2023 1:00:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this fun children's write. Have a great/fun day......................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/29/2023 9:55:00 AM

- Imaginative and cute poem, Paula - Good luck in the contest and with the book :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/29/2023 12:59:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like my fun "Fairytale" write. No book here just part of the write. Have a great/fun day......................