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A Surprise Upon Awakening

I woke up and in the mirror, saw a stranger-- a face not mine, but like my own. So I wondered: Am I mad now? But no... if you think you're insane, you're not-- the mind's own Catch-22. Still... why did this face seem to belong to another? I sensed my soul at work: not quite done with its nightly dream-making, weaving entire worlds from strands of memory-- bits of ego-- clouds of imagination. My soul was seeing my flesh as it really exists-- merely a convenient container designed to navigate life and this world of the temporary, the fleeting, the lessening shadows. And so my immortal part gave its living doppelganger a great and wondrous gift: This is what you really are as flesh and bone-- a waxen mold, a vanity, almost an illusion ....

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Date: 4/1/2020 11:44:00 PM
A wonderful poem ~ congratulations on your win!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/2/2020 2:14:00 PM
Thank you. my friend--take care in these fraught times!
Date: 8/11/2017 11:35:00 PM
Hi L.J. an interesting and intense poem. Well done. Congratulations on your win!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/12/2017 5:55:00 PM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 11/2/2015 9:06:00 PM
That was deep
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