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A Sunken Pink Camaro

A Sunken Pink Camaro Tropical fish. swim in and out of the windows of a sunken pink Camaro. I dive, leaving a rainbow stream of billowing bubbles Above on the timber pier, someone with a piano accordion plays chiming French music, while nearby old fishermen swap vivid fish stories’. Through ripples, of clear water I see, children dancing to tin drums beaten by a lively, ivory- toothed Jamaican. I surface, with a turquoise-tailed mermaid, perched on my left shoulder. Some how, I have rescued her from a sunken pink Camaro Suzanne Delaney For P D’s & SKAT's Women write about Car Contest

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Date: 5/28/2021 8:25:00 PM
Whimsical and exotic ~ best combo
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Date: 1/7/2020 7:49:00 AM
This is delightful. Great imagery. Hugs Rick.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/7/2020 11:50:00 AM
Hi Rich: so happy you enjoyed it. Hope you are having a wonderful week. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 2/6/2016 8:57:00 PM
Hi Suz, thank you for the reply on my old comment. LOL, I'm all late... Love LINDA
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Date: 2/4/2016 7:37:00 PM
Your title drew me in ... I was dreadfully curious. Quite a whimsical little ditty you have here. I'm here scratching my head wondering what makes the Camaro sudden, or how it is a mermaid could be perched on your shoulders! Ha! Great colorful fun.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/5/2016 4:51:00 PM
Hi Timothy: This came about from a word challenge. I can't remember the exact list but I had fun writing it. SuZ
Date: 1/10/2016 11:36:00 PM
Hi Suzanne,, Congrats on your win. Love *SKAT Love*
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Date: 1/10/2016 10:30:00 PM
Hello Lovely Suz, :) Congratulations on your awesome win. ""You showed me yours-- now's my turn to show you mine --- LADIES"" Stop by my latest blog if you'd like. I have no poem to share under this topic. In which you wrote bravely. I'd like to share photos of my BUDDY (car).......... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/6/2016 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Linda and Skat for a fun contest and for placing me. Most appreciative. SuZ
Date: 12/30/2015 3:34:00 AM
- Love it, good luck in contest Suzanne :) ! - I wish you and your loved ones a happy new year! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/30/2015 1:05:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise: Thanks for your visit and good wishes. My shingles have me confined to home but the meds have helped considerably with the extreme discomfort.
Date: 12/29/2015 6:22:00 PM
oh this is ADORABLE. Most interesting of all the car poems I have seen. Mine gets award for most long winded.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/29/2015 6:38:00 PM
Thanks Andrea: I liked your history of cars owned...They really are a big part of our lives. Like you we always bought used cars for many years and a few years ago we were in a position to buy my dream car....a silver MERCEDES CONVERTABLE. The top is fully electronic and reminds me of an aero plane with the precision of how it folds down, even this one had been pre-owned but lightly used. I love it for how it makes me feel, SuZ
Date: 12/28/2015 7:46:00 PM
Hahaha, love your creativity too, Suzanne. Fantastic images. Good luck in the contest. Not that you need luck with this ditty. :-)
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/29/2015 5:11:00 PM
Thanks Robin: Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 12/28/2015 3:12:00 PM
Sounds like a real fisherman's tale Suzanne:-) great imagery good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/28/2015 4:23:00 PM
Thanks Jan: I had fun writing it.

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