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A Sunday In June

once a vibrant blue with humidity on the rise storm clouds quickly grew rain fell with no surprise a visible sun directly above covered by shades of grey it's radiance shines occasionally on this dark and gloomy day i'ved heard stories reasons why it rains that god is filled with worry agony and pain shedding tears of sorrow upon this world he built washing away impurities cleansing the world of it's filth the rain starts slow and light thunder begins to roar fury shows its might the rain begins to pour as quickly as it came the clouds begin to sway the suns radiance withstands what a bright and sunny day ................:JP)

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Date: 7/17/2009 1:35:00 PM
Jared, your poetry is beauty to the eye. And its a pleasure to read, The Highlander>>James
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Date: 7/17/2009 6:58:00 AM
Bright and Sunny day--i thank God for that,my family and friends making my days brighter--well penned--charma
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Date: 7/14/2009 6:52:00 AM
Jared, and the smell of the rain is so pure. Beautiful writing. Love, Carol
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