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A Summer Storm On Ludlow Street

Sipping on iced coffee Speaking of dreams so lofty That they evaporate like the smoke from our pipes. The air we breathe is filled with black clouds that were: The Great American Novel, A cure for cancer, A Nobel Prize, And all the answers to the world's disasters. For now we can't move; This sweltering heat Will cook the meat off our bones. But then the sky, Filled to the brim with our pessimism, Lets out a blood curdling scream. In a flash of light-- It explodes into a million raindrops. My thoughts quench the sidewalk  And, if I were younger, I could bend over to pick up the pieces and start again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/10/2012 6:54:00 AM
I love what the black clouds were - great way to describe these thoughts. I am not usually a free verse fan, but I definitely like your work and will read more :)
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Date: 6/22/2012 1:14:00 PM
great write,Priya
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Date: 6/22/2012 1:13:00 PM
Its never to late...so long as you have breath....than stand I say,...stand....come what may...Peace to you and blessings.
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