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A Summer Glance

He awoke from his sleepy slumber, To the smell of fruits, water, and cut grass. The kids ran, and the doors opened, As the guards unlocked the gate to give pass. The sun's rays covered every leaf and crack, As they gave warmth to the town's melancholy mood, And the families gave way to the tables and cars, Which set up shop for fun and food. The adults laughed, and the kids played, Hide-and-Seek amongst the tall field. The peopled yawned and the eyelids dropped, As the tumbling kids began to yield. The cars slowly rumbled away, As the man returned to his drowsy trance, And the golden sun set in the distance, For what he saw was a summer glance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/22/2016 4:51:00 PM
a pleasure to read again Erick, well penned :) *SKAT*"
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Date: 5/21/2016 1:15:00 AM
wOw, how did You do it to win so fast. :) this is aweSOme, I SO SO LoVE it. I am GOinG TO giVE thIS A HIGH 7. well deserveD.
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Date: 5/21/2016 1:10:00 AM
Erick Figueroa, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/18/2016 5:13:00 PM
I am extremely grateful for such positive responses to my first poem. The community is filled with such amazing and nice people. I will continue my work as a poet to entertain and aid my friends.
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Date: 5/18/2016 3:24:00 PM
Welcome, Erick, and congratulations on your placement in 'Summer Sight' Premiere Contest! Lovely poem! Sandra
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Date: 5/18/2016 3:50:00 AM
Greetings Erick. Congrats for your placement with this awesome piece!! ;-)
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Date: 5/18/2016 3:34:00 AM
Erick, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/18/2016 3:33:00 AM
Wow, I love when new poets win in Laura's contest. They always seem to fit especially the new. I'm so happy for you ... a perfect 7, for your first poem and contest entryfa. I so so enjoyed this oNE a lOt. Linda
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Date: 5/18/2016 1:00:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Erick. :)
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Date: 5/18/2016 12:12:00 AM
Erick, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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Date: 5/17/2016 8:48:00 PM
Erick, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 5/17/2016 8:33:00 PM
Congratulations Eric on the placement of the contest
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