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A Summer Couplet

Gentle breeze caresses me as I lie down under the sun little waves tickle my feet making my sunbathing fun. ###################################

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Matthew Horstkotter

Date: 8/3/2013 5:20:00 AM

Sounds like a great place to be. great piece.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 10:55:00 AM

loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/1/2013 4:54:00 PM

nice one, kash! congrats!

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/30/2013 4:41:00 PM

Sounds so relaxing, Kash! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 6/30/2013 4:32:00 PM

a nice breezy summery couplet, brings to mind days I've spent on the beach, congrats on your win :)

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 6/30/2013 3:53:00 PM

Wonderful couplet,Kash..Congrats on your win....

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/30/2013 2:47:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/30/2013 12:08:00 PM

great cheers to you for a fine win, kashi... sunbathing keeps you going..:) huggs

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/30/2013 12:29:00 AM

Summer brings out the kid in all of us, Kash. Congratulations on a fine win! Always, Annalise

John Posey

Date: 6/29/2013 6:08:00 PM

Kash, you are describing exactly what I'd like to do.... Great win.... Jake

Joseph May

Date: 6/29/2013 3:57:00 PM

congrats on a fine win Kash

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 3:09:00 PM

KASH, Nice and Relaxing beach moment. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/29/2013 1:15:00 PM

I can't help but smile reading this one...I want to be under the sun, and feel the breeze too!! And yes......even if it tickles my toes!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2013 8:49:00 AM

this was sweet. I had no clue you wrote it, Kash. YOu knew I would love one about sunbathing!! Congrats to you.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/29/2013 8:23:00 AM

Fun write too..congrats Kash. BG

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/17/2013 1:32:00 PM

kashi, can i ask a favor?.. WRITE another fine work, lol.. hello and huggs..:)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/16/2013 3:15:00 AM

Feeling giddy about this delightful work, kashi... is it summer there?... amazing!..:) huggs

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/15/2013 8:22:00 PM

This is a superior, a very wonderful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What an enlightening piece, such a fun poem, Great Work!!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/15/2013 4:43:00 PM

I like the way you made sunbathing a playful activity

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/15/2013 1:23:00 PM

:) Oh....I'm a beach baby! LOVE THIS! Lovely, Kash...Glad to reconnect!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/15/2013 12:54:00 PM

- Delightful summer .... Beautiful summer couplet, Kash! - Luck in contest!!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)