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A Summer Couplet

Barbeques sizzle as spirits soar into the dazzling day. Fun in the sun abounds as children ageless come out to play! written 6/10/2013 for Andrea's contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 10:58:00 AM

loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/2/2013 12:56:00 PM

Reads like a fun day for all..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your win...Sara

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 3:24:00 PM

Deb. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~"

Kash Poet

Date: 6/29/2013 1:38:00 PM

Love this Deb.Congrats on your win !

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/29/2013 1:30:00 PM

We are all children under the sun!! Love this !!! :)

John Posey

Date: 6/29/2013 10:15:00 AM

Deb, this is a natural for this contest. It's hard to separate kids from summer... Congrats... Jake

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2013 8:58:00 AM

this is a great one for the fourth of July too!! Congrats for your cute poem's win in my contest.

Kate Wilderson

Date: 6/10/2013 6:19:00 PM

Wonderful! It really gives the picture of summer!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/10/2013 5:14:00 PM

nice one! it really evokes summer...

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/10/2013 4:53:00 PM

I really loved this exciting summer enhanced write my friend! You have portrayed the summer with this gorgeous poem! What a tremendous piece, such a positively enlightening poem, Great Work!!