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A Stupid Refuge

I was standing in a queue at Mumbai Airport And there in a parallel queue a stunning beauty Our eyes met, the faces were quite familiar As we graduated same year from the same university. *Kalpana, the vision of my green salad salad days Never had even a dream I will meet her like this Boarding the same British Airways air vessel. We travelled together, talked for hours. Discussed and debated our hopes and dreams. I was headed for the British University for further study And she, the exponent of *Kathkali dance for Albert Hall We navigated each other’s mind, body, and the dreams. Before the aircraft landed at the Heathrow Airport Promises were made, dreams and hopes were shaped Standing together with hand in hand at check-out queue The vision gone and I standing alone in the Airport. +++++++ May 21, 2014 Form: Free Verse Dr.Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest: Imagination by Dave Wood * An Indian name of a girl meaning vision or imagination * One of the Classical Dance of India

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Date: 5/29/2014 6:30:00 PM
sweet win..>PD<
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Date: 5/28/2014 4:04:00 PM
Many congrat's on your win with this fine poem, Dr. Ram. Lainie
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Date: 5/28/2014 2:46:00 PM
This world is much smaller than we might think, when we meet the same people again and again. Sometimes, those faces only show themselves in our imaginations.... I enjoyed this interesting poem, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/28/2014 10:57:00 AM
Very nice story Dr Ram....congrats on your win
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Date: 5/28/2014 10:43:00 AM
tremendous vision that delights, dr.ram.. warm congrats and huggs!
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Date: 5/28/2014 10:02:00 AM
Great imagination! Thank you for the footnotes.....helped to appreciate more this winning poem; congrats. // paul
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Date: 5/28/2014 9:58:00 AM
Great write and love the interesting twist at the end! Bravo and congratulations on this win!
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:36:00 PM
Lost into ur imagination is the reader Dr. Ram ! congrats on first place win !
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:17:00 PM
Dr, your poem is awesome..... Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/21/2014 1:46:00 PM
Dr Ram, wishing you luck in my contest...Linda
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:15:00 AM
fascinating write but why couldn't you give it a happier ending
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Date: 5/21/2014 7:23:00 AM
To reconnect, the pleasure of it, only to be back to being alone, an experience unique to you, but a feeling known to most. thanks for sharing.
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