A Stroll In the Moonlight

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The Joseph's Star

The Joseph's Star is a poetry form created by Christina R Jussaume on 08/06/07 in memory of her Dad. This poem has no rhyme, and is written according to syllable counts. Syllables are 1, 3, 5, 7, 7, 5, 3, and 1. The poem may be written on any subject, be center aligned, has no stanza limit, and should have complete statements in each.

I’m so happy you’re a part of me I believed love was a dream until you made it come true and now there is no denying you. You’re stupendous more beautiful than a garden in full bloom and sweeter than the nectar that honeybees sip from a flower’s heart. My ultimate fantasy begins with a stroll in the moonlight as two hearts morph into one synergetic soul forever more. (Joseph's Star) 1/17/2016

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/17/2018 1:58:00 PM

Absolutely lovely, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2018 5:23:00 PM

Thanks so much Line, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/18/2016 9:43:00 PM

I am fairly sure that I am in love with your poetry and need to spend more time on your pages. Good intentions, so many people - I will do my best because I'm selfish, and reading you is to my own benefit. I see this as romantic as any Valentine's card, but lacking 'cheap shot' rhymes. Tis' beautiful ... CayCay

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/19/2016 7:49:00 AM

Thanks CayCay, as always your comments are most welcome. Emile.