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A Strawberry She'D Be

She's dimming inside dont you see Go to her she's someone's family She didnt know the danger that came her way Others at the shak will just look away She looked kinda sweet, maybe even new Little dancing angel, curls shimmered like dew She wondered about the man who had her sighted You knew you had her, demon heart so delighted She loved that first burning white wonder Her house so clean, her babies deeply slumber She met the sly sighter just round the corner Closing the door quietly as she just stepped away She didnt notice the smoke billowing their way Keeping the pain wrenching thoughts from returning to soon She tells him yes to another cheap room Hungry sighter pokes her skin She feels a hot rush that forces a grin When light comes her soul voids of glee She feels a moment of clarity and drops fast to her knees Bodys all over on fire with hope She's done with white wonder, yes dope

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Date: 3/14/2016 1:31:00 PM
michelle ault, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:50:00 PM
Michelle, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/18/2010 2:02:00 AM
very clever write! can feel the atmosphere.
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Date: 8/16/2010 4:32:00 AM
Sweet Michelle.. very creative and lovely sentiments here.. intense too .. intricate as well.. very deep .. enjoyed your brilliance today.. thankxxx for your wonderful comments on my poetry.. always happy to meet new poets on the soup and help them out.. so if u need any help let me know..luv... even from Italy on my vacation the trusty cell phone works fine..luv..caio
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Date: 8/16/2010 4:32:00 AM
Reminds me of "Pretty Woman" and the back drop scenes there too..luv.. great write today..luv..
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Date: 8/15/2010 10:52:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Michelle. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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