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A Story of An Angel

my life it took a turn some one was talking each week when shopping i got a cancer scare never said nothing 80 per cent chance thank god who cured me my mother refused to leave my side she knew with this looming i just did not care my fiance dumped me whilst i was going to hospital my mother knew this i had given up in life god knows i tried so hard now i felt completely worthless all i ever did was love someone her knowing what i was going through done it like this it was like i was stabbed in the pain within the head i dropped to my knees and roared to the heavens why do this to me all i ever done was love someone i gave my everything helped you rear your kids you gave me one cruel end thats another story i have written about she had an affair with her boss forgot about everyone but her self not ever talking thats how it ended for me she kept asking me down to talk each time she lied caught out as her brother phoned saying his sister my partner is having an affair even the kids knew about before me i lost everything now i stand at the crossroads i will write the story of the beautiful angel who helped me out her heart it touched me but sorry with love i was in hell didn't want to burden anyone as the shoulders were laden so heavy with internal pain in betrayal not wishing it on anyone this beautiful angel was a young girl half my age said to me once in the time in question my head all over the place tortured deep within love confused what did i do wrong she came walking up to me smiling i was smiling back as i was pleased to see her she put her lips to mines saying that she loved me to be continued in angel two

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Date: 9/18/2013 2:07:00 PM
Ow gee..you misted my eyes cause i can feel so muchl pain as you were writing this..So deep this poem is..Im sure your life is worth hundred angels.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/19/2013 6:21:00 PM
YOU ARE GIFTED WITH SUCH A BEAUTIFUL EMOTION PLEASE I DID NOT MEAN TO DRY THOSE BEAUTIFUL EYES YOU ARE ONE BEAUTIFUL ANGEL I THANK YOU DEEPLY WONDERFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/18/2013 2:00:00 PM
This is great I'll wait for part II.... Lucy
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/19/2013 1:58:00 PM
LUCY THANK YOU DEEPLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT GREATLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/18/2013 1:33:00 PM
what an intriguing storyline; can't wait for the final edition, liam.. go for it..: huggs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/19/2013 1:54:00 PM
THANK YOU KINDLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED

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