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A storm is brewing from skies on fire black clouds persist with no regard to what is true to love's desire a heart ignored, forever scarred. Unshared feelings left in the cold that tremble from neglectful winds few broken branches left to hold when gusts of guilt will not rescind A storm is brewing, take shelter now no bravery gained by tempting fate allow true hope to keep its vow and find the joy that does await. A Storm Is Brewing Contest 04/17/2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2016 5:04:00 PM

this is quite lovely, Charlie. It was good to find one here that I have not yet seen!

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/24/2016 8:01:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/30/2016 6:03:00 PM

A most tempestuous write as I read it Charlie, full of variable's an effective piece.'

Charlie Smith
Date: 6/2/2016 6:46:00 AM

Thank you Joe...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/17/2016 1:44:00 AM

I see you went with a metaphor too Charlie. I really liked your entry. Congrats on your high placement my friend! # 7 :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/17/2016 6:23:00 AM

Thank you Connie...

Rob Carmack

Date: 5/16/2016 9:03:00 PM

Charlie, congrats on your win.

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/17/2016 6:22:00 AM

Thank you Rob...

Joseph May

Date: 5/16/2016 10:46:00 AM

Great write and win Charlie...Congrats

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/16/2016 10:49:00 AM

Thank you Joseph...

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 5/15/2016 10:46:00 PM

Congratulations Charlie on the placement of the contest

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/15/2016 11:12:00 PM

Thank you so much Nayda...

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/15/2016 9:36:00 PM

An inspiring write that encourages us all to weather any storm... A nice flow to this poem and great rhyming. ABAB rhyme schemes are not always easy, so well done on that, Charlie. Congrats on a win!

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/15/2016 11:11:00 PM

You are too kind Kelly, thank you so much...

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/19/2016 12:40:00 PM

Beautiful simply, loved much my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/19/2016 12:45:00 PM

I am always encouraged by your kindness BL. Thank you, Charlie

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/19/2016 8:00:00 AM

My pleasure Charlie.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/19/2016 7:23:00 AM

I like your take on the theme! Well done!

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/19/2016 7:33:00 AM

Thank you for the visit and encouragement Richard...

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/18/2016 5:14:00 PM

The storms of life, Charlie...sometimes worse than those of nature. Very touching and deep. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/18/2016 7:27:00 PM

Thank you Sandra, I appreciate your encouragement and your observations...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/18/2016 4:10:00 PM

I see you went with nature and passion as well Charlie. This is outstanding! Your rhyme is superb! I know I will be congratulating you with this gem!#7 ;)

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/18/2016 7:24:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/18/2016 1:28:00 PM

spectacular piece, charlie.. been reading so many themes on this one and yours is well done; ohh mine is nothing like this.. huggs

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/18/2016 1:45:00 PM

So funny Nette, I just finished reading your entry and I couldn't disagree with you more. Your entry was wonderful. Thank you for the visit, I'm sure I'll see you high on the award list, Charlie