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A Storm Is Brewing

A storm is brewing Everytime you leave your girl in the dark Cold words she is chewing Don't make such a deep mark Everytime you leave your girl in the dark She realises where she stands in your life Don't make such a deep mark Don't plunge into her the bloody knife She realises where she stands in your life When you beat her up with that belt Don't plunge into her the bloody knife You'll never know the pain she felt When you beat her up with that belt Cold words she was chewing Don't plunge into her the bloody knife A Storm Is Brewing Written on- 17/4/2016

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Date: 4/19/2016 9:21:00 AM
This is wonderful writing, Sohini! I really enjoyed reading it. It is so beautiful. ~ kc
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Sohini Mukherjee
Date: 4/19/2016 9:22:00 AM
Thank you very much Karam :)
Date: 4/17/2016 10:51:00 AM
This is such a deep write, greatly soul-touching. May no one ever experience such cruelty in their lives!!! All the best for the contest:)
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Sohini Mukherjee
Date: 4/17/2016 10:53:00 AM
Thanks so much Daniel :)
Date: 4/17/2016 8:47:00 AM
Gosh such deep sad imagery in your pantoum good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Sohini Mukherjee
Date: 4/17/2016 8:51:00 AM
Thanks so much Jan :)

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