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A Storm Is Brewing

A storm is brewing, danger ensuing Alarms are sounding in town Gale winds are blowing, rain ongoing Streak lightning straight up and straight down Mother and father, sons and daughters Quickly make way for protection The sky was on fire, storm fed desire As it mounted it's insurrection They make it to cover, hug each other Mother nature releases ferocity Timely eschewing, the storm that was brewing They listen with curiosity Inside was quiet, outside a riot While they patiently waited it out Rehearsed and prepared, no one was scared Then that was the end of the drought an original poem by Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/15/2016 4:07:00 PM
Hi Daniel , this is so true , i enjoyed.
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Date: 5/18/2016 7:15:00 AM
Hi Daniel. Congrats for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 5/17/2016 3:41:00 PM
Severe weather can put the fear of God into anyone. Flying debris is what can kill you faster than anything else. Coming from my early youth in Kansas, I remember the fear. You express it well in your poem Daniel. Congratulations on your win! #7. ; )
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Date: 5/15/2016 10:57:00 PM
Congratulations Daniel on the placement of the contest
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Date: 5/15/2016 9:55:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem very much, Daniel. Great rhythm and rhyming throughout... Nice work! Congrats on a win!
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Date: 5/10/2016 1:09:00 PM
Aha, I think we've all been there! Lovely flowing rhymes, Daniel.
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Date: 4/19/2016 3:06:00 PM
Good one Daniel. It's nice to be tucked in safe while all hell breaks loose outside.
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Date: 4/19/2016 8:58:00 AM
Wow fantastic...hope you are feeling a little better today DT...peace
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Date: 4/18/2016 1:22:00 PM
how fascinating this is, daniel... i did one but i like this more!..huggs
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Date: 4/18/2016 8:07:00 AM
Great write:) Reads like a fierce storm out there. All the best for the contest:)
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Date: 4/17/2016 3:33:00 AM
this is a forceful, illuminating piece, daniel with a punchy end line.. huggs
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