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A Stone On the Bed of a River

Sometimes I feel like a stone on the bed of a fast-flowing mountain river: namelessness, immobility, contemplation; nor past nor future instantaneous rapid stream of illusions

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/28/2019 6:59:00 AM

... interesting ... well done, Kurt :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Foster

Date: 8/27/2019 9:05:00 AM

Wow. I was transported...then found. I could feel the calm and the water. Excellent write. Brief words weighed and measured with professional, excellence. Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2019 5:21:00 PM

well done, kurt. I sure like seeing these mini haibuns. I don't like reading LONG ones.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2019 1:14:00 AM

I can envision the sounds and scents of a cool mountain river and it is so tranquil. I love the surreal vibes in this peaceful Haibun Kurt. : ) xxoo

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/24/2019 10:52:00 AM

Enjoyed your poem, Kurt.