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A Stone In the Cold 6 Runnerup

Ahead the bear in sudden motion stands, focusing on the downed, forgetting me. His pain now deadened by pure, primal rage, he is intent on mangling fallen three. My sleeping conscience suddenly awakes. My frigid fingers let an arrow fly. Though they are criminals and I'm the law, I cannot let these hardened felons die. My heavy pocket holds a loaded gun, though using arrows, I had placed it there. My posse is nearby, they'll hear the shot, a shame I have to use it on the bear. Happy that my hunting has not failed, my job's not done until I see them jailed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/15/2014 10:16:00 AM
Way to go...Great work..Sara
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Date: 3/15/2014 2:02:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine with beautiful sonnet, joyce
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Date: 3/15/2014 1:11:00 AM
Joyce, , Congratulations, on your Hunt for a Sonnet Gem. Awesomely done. ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/8/2014 1:45:00 PM
Great work for the contest..All together we ought to have that bear taken care of ...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/7/2014 9:17:00 PM
Joyce, just by making sure those bad guys got put away, you showed your conscience is very strong and good. You did a great job, wrote a quite metrical sonnet too!
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Date: 2/7/2014 9:54:00 AM
A thrilling captivating hunter's poem. Ah poor grizzly. One of yor best in poetic skills and rhyme flow. Nice to read u again. Tc.
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Date: 2/6/2014 8:57:00 AM
love this, Joyce. Awesome. Hope you're having a great week, my friend xx
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Date: 2/5/2014 6:27:00 PM
Very Nice Poem! Enjoyed it much…Thanks for sharing//Sinclair
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Date: 2/4/2014 7:01:00 PM
Nicely done a powerful write with alot of meaning behind it. cheri thanks for the sharing and for your wonderful comments on my work sorry i had to make it a short come back next time i'll write more.
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Date: 2/4/2014 4:44:00 PM
Joyce a vey good sonnet as a stand alone sonnet, it has depth and a very good image..David
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Date: 2/4/2014 4:08:00 PM
excellent poem, joyce! i could picture the whole scene. ~ by the way, congrats on your team's win!
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Date: 2/4/2014 4:04:00 PM
Thank goodness for your civility,but pursue this to the end. God sonnet Joyce. Kayod5.
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