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A Sting

A lash, which from an eye might fall,... will not be felt- so small a thing will not be mourned A tear which from the eye might fall,... is like a thorn- so small the sting it, must be borne It dissipates, upon your face soon disappears, all trace is gone,... yet leaves a face, forever burned ---------------------------------------------------------

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/6/2013 9:29:00 PM
Some really great writing here... COngratulations...Jake
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Date: 7/6/2013 3:53:00 PM
Carrie, such rich quality and depth. Your expression of the tear is impeccable. congrats on the win :)
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Date: 7/6/2013 1:59:00 PM
lovely. ........ skat
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Date: 7/5/2013 11:13:00 PM
CARRIE.... congratulations... from:Linda
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Date: 5/17/2012 10:10:00 PM
Carrie, another wonderful win , congratulations in Brian's contest.. ~ always* PD
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Date: 5/17/2012 8:22:00 PM
wow, simple yet so profound. Congratulations, Carrie.
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Date: 5/17/2012 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on you placement in Brian's "177" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2012 2:25:00 PM
Like this a lot Carrie. Congratulations
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Date: 5/16/2012 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations. Good things come in small packages.
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Date: 5/16/2012 1:17:00 PM
Love it..........Short verse for you....Very nice. Keep it up!!!!
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Date: 5/16/2012 1:17:00 PM
Love it..........Short verse for you....Very nice. Keep it up!!!!
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Date: 5/16/2012 12:29:00 PM
Carrie congrats on your win..this is so cool..David
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Date: 5/16/2012 12:19:00 PM
so much sentiment in so few words!! Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love Always
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Date: 5/16/2012 11:35:00 AM
WONderful... it's no WONder you WON! Terry
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Date: 5/11/2012 9:19:00 AM
This one dings me, Carrie. I'm suffering from the weeping eye. A crust forms over my lashes. Your poem is wonderful. Love, daver
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Date: 5/10/2012 2:41:00 PM
dear carrie, there so many words in this poem that i would love to use. it has inspired me greatly. and i can see a great poem comming out of it. so far it's words on a piece of paper. a few words from this poem. but i have something special in mind that you will love. i'll let you know when. tommarrow for sure. T.S.
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Date: 5/10/2012 12:45:00 PM
Well said Carrie, good. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/10/2012 12:40:00 PM
Love it.............
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