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A Stifled Cry

"It was a mistake", she said. A tiny life swiped in seconds as gods creation is rendered a mere cluster of cells. Returned back to heaven hoping the return policy wouldn't deny. It was a mistake; a stifled cry A lifetime of progress, innovation, and memories down the drain. The notorious "what if" squashed with plan b; no hopes of a future. A stifled cry She could have cured cancer or delivered world peace. She could've fed the hungry and housed the poor. She could've been a Honors Harvard medical school graduate and your pride and joy. None are the magical christmas mornings, first days of school, or birthdays. Terminated are the memorable first steps and momentous coos calling for "mamma". No more possibilities. Now a stifled cry. "It was a mistake", she said. A moment of carelessness and selfishness translates into a life lost. Permanent. Sent back into the arms of god. An easy way out. A stifled cry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/8/2014 7:49:00 AM
What a way to pull your readers into your story.... nicely done! I like the repeated punchline at the end too! Best Wishes!
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Date: 5/8/2014 12:48:00 AM
Great piece. Heartfelt.
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Date: 5/6/2014 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Alexis
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Date: 4/22/2014 1:34:00 PM
Alexis, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/21/2014 10:17:00 PM
-Alexis that was a very moving poem. Sending goosebumps and chills down my spine. Very profound. I enjoyed it . It made me want to cry. Emotional!! Welcome to our community. Hope to see you around. You are very talented. (:) Karen
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Date: 4/21/2014 10:31:00 PM
Wow! Thank you so much :)
Date: 4/20/2014 8:09:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Alexis :) - I choose your first moving and very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/21/2014 10:32:00 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome!
Date: 4/18/2014 7:15:00 PM
Hi Alexis, a heartfelt poem... deep for a first poem.. , WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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