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A Step To the Blue Mountain

A step to the Blue Mountain, Where airy whimsical winds singing, Flowing love counting no certain, That's the joy warmth You're bringing. A step to the Blue Mountain, Challenging as crossing the Jordan River, Life's path is not as smooth as fountain, Bare our foots and hearts to walk deeper. A step to the Blue Mountain, This lost sheep needs You're guiding, Surrender souls and strong submitting, Learning and correcting weakness dying. A step to the Blue Mountain, A thousand miles yet to be discover, I give thanks to the One Creation, That He never forsaken me forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/26/2012 7:04:00 AM
I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings Melanie. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you. Love and blessings, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2012 7:48:00 PM
melanie, enjoyed...pd
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Melanie Tan
Date: 6/14/2012 7:50:00 PM
Glad that you did,,God bless

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