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Watching from an old porch swing An artist hangs from a string Weaving without any hands Carefully placing silk strands With masterpiece on display A tapestry, lace design Up close observers must pay Their life, on which she will dine 5-30-2018 by Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/21/2018 1:46:00 PM
What an awesome, clever piece you have penned, in every respect - the personification, rhyme sequence, easy flow - all add up to a most enjoyable read this Saturday afternoon! Love and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 7/16/2018 6:33:00 PM
G'day Daniel … well done. Spiders do fascinate me with their artistry and ability to lure the unsuspecting. Enjoyed - Lindsay
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Date: 7/5/2018 9:59:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, even though I don't like spiders.
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Date: 7/5/2018 4:49:00 PM
Nice job -JT
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Date: 7/5/2018 7:12:00 AM
Hi Daniel, this is a gem to read my friend. I could read this one over and over. The webs can be so beautiful, the occupants, well, say no more, i am an Arachnaphobic. I loved the content of this wonderful write my friend. Has to be a fave Daniel. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 6/27/2018 9:11:00 AM
Just noticed the gem of a poem, I see it won a contest, and is climbing the top 100(pun intended) belated congrats on a commentary on a masterpiece of nature!
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Date: 6/23/2018 3:28:00 PM
Had to read this clever poem twice before I got the point. Slowness comes with age, friend. I have one about the spider on somewhat the same amazing theme. It may still be on my post. Congratulations on your win, be it belatedly. / M
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Date: 6/20/2018 9:38:00 AM
Brilliant creation my friend. I dislike spiders but their webs are beautiful creations. As is your win with this excellent poem.. A fav...
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Date: 6/16/2018 6:29:00 AM
Oh what a deceptive web she weaves. One always gets drawn by the 'magic' of a spider spinning its web. Awesome poem Daniel. Congratulations on your fine win...Maria
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Date: 6/12/2018 6:51:00 PM
Ah, a show and a meal.. one a fantasy and one quite real!
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Date: 6/12/2018 5:21:00 PM
I think I read this before but did not congratulate you on the win. I really like the picture you put with it too, danny
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Date: 6/12/2018 12:23:00 PM
Really enjoyed (and identified with) this one, Daniel---once had a roommate out East who tried the Greenwich Village scene for a year...and lost 35 pounds! Love the title and the poem. Congrats on your richly deserved win in the contest! ~ Gershon
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Date: 6/6/2018 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations DT, wonderful write...
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Date: 6/5/2018 3:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Danny. It's a pleasure reading this poem again. Both the imagery and the rhyme scheme contribute to make a success out of these spidery lines. Regards // paul
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Date: 6/5/2018 10:50:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/5/2018 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Daniel with your very clever poem. :))
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Date: 6/4/2018 10:41:00 PM
Clever and lovely ... Congratulations on your win ... A nice read for me
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Date: 6/4/2018 9:31:00 AM
Daniel, congrats on your win for this well written piece. John
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Date: 6/4/2018 12:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this creative and exceptional poem of nature. I enjoyed this.
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Date: 6/3/2018 9:16:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Daniel.
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Date: 6/3/2018 8:22:00 PM
Wow......this is wonderful Daniel! Beautiful as well as creepy, (that is not an easy thing to do !!) Congrats to you my friend!! And thank you for the support as well !
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Date: 6/3/2018 7:59:00 PM
You weave a beautiful poem Daniel...Very creative..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 6/3/2018 6:38:00 PM
Many congrats on your win DT, as you know I really loved this gem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/3/2018 6:23:00 PM
Excellent DT. Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 6/3/2018 11:27:00 AM
Truly creative and inspiring work my friend. As one that has been caught in far too many webs in my rash youth, this gem shines bright. A fav..
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